HARRY POTTER: Causing Chaos in the Wizarding world

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Scientistx

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Uksmal

The story starts well. A smart MC with an influential house behind him. I hope the author complies and doesn't force the MC to help Potter when he has nothing to gain, as other authors did. Potter has a plot armor and an old man on his ass that manipulates every part of his life, he will keep him alive until he is no longer useful.

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A_fellow_daoist

Full disclaimer: Harry Potter, this wonderful world belongs to J. K. Rowling MC of the story is portrayed as greedy, selfish and he occasionally uses other people for his goals. so don't blame me if you don't like it

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Lord_Hallow

Novel is written well. Characters have some complexity but it takes backstage to the MCs scheming. Personally, I’m not the biggest fan of sociopath MCs so I wont be continuing the novel. Something Just creeps me out about the MC faking all his emotions and that he did it to himself on purpose. Like i said, written well and if you like a manipulative MC with makor Sociopathic tendencies then this is definitely the story for you.

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Phoenix1998

Hopefully the encounter with troll will make him to see things differently? he is too arrogant right now and obssesed with harry. Other than that nice chapter. Keep updating more

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Egemen_Tosun_1614

good novel..................................................................................................................................

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Fallout_Armageddon

I never put 5 star for update if you were wondering, because it's practically impossible to not mess up once. this story is good in my personal opinion there's not much to say about it, mc isn't stupid, but there are the typical filler things like the sorting ceremony being fully there, and the song the hat sings I'd recommend this if you're bored, or just wanna read something about harry potter

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Phoenix1998

Nice chapter. He should copy the map but should learn oblivate spell and should use it on the twins after 2 month..............................

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Uncle_Sheogorath

Not bad. However, there are some problems. Firstly to much filler like rewriting word for word things from the canon books, like the sorting ceremony song etc. Don't do it! Its a waste of our time I doubt anyone reads it. It only fills the word cap. Fillers are never good. Moreover making OP mc is good but only when it makes logical sense. So for example mc in the first year learning all the books from the library is just silly. Completely breaks realism even with an eidetic memory. Keep mc strong for his age/level but don't make him a god. So no dumbledore/Voldemort power range while still in school. Maybe when he is in his final year it could be possible somehow.

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Phoenix1998

He should try to become heir black. He is not heir bones. Other than that great story. Keep up the good work author. Cant wait to read more.

Wow this is a nice story. Love that mc is not good. Keep up the good work. Wow this is a nice story. Love that mc is not good. Keep up the good work.

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Phoenix1998

I binged this story. So great. Since susan is the heiresss and not him due to her father being lord jason should try to get black hairship. He should first free sirius and prove that he is innocent so that he will not be called son of a traitor. Then kill sirius and make sure he didn't will everything to harry as he did in cannon. Thats way jason can become lord black and can get access to grrimauld palace and huge collection of dark books.

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Dogramagra

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otakubr

very good +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Daoist721221

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