Teen Wolf: As A King

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Vassago

This is bad I mean really bad. First the chapter that is used to make up the word count, I mean can you not save up a few chapters to get to get the actual limit. second of all your writing is atrocious.

LV 13

I_am_inevitable

He talks about op wishes and then gives himself 3 wishes that are pretty much just enhancing his looks you can get that with one wish and then for the last 2 only ask for regen 10x and god lvl talent really that's just a waste. not worth the read.

LV 14

jesus_hernandez

this story is unreadable do yourself a favor and find a translator I don't know what language you are translating from but whatever source you are using to translate is garbage I read 3 chapters and I had know idea what I was reading not only that there are only like 6 actual chapters

LV 4

KK9494

1 star- because you are writing a fanfic 2 stars-because yOu are writing a **** wolf fanfic 3 stars -because you are Writing a r-18 harem fanfic =5 stars 😋 Fuck them all😁

LV 10

Quidanstealsnovels

Rarely do I see such a bad writer. Like wtf are you even saying? Did you copy and paste this into a machine translation? You can barely tell whats going on. It's like its written by a 12 year old kid who watched naruto for the first time, it's so edgy.

LV 4

ItIswhatItIs

You should have made him OP like look at Captain America with the Super Soldier Serum and look at him it's like they are from 2 different worlds. Other than that and punctuation it is perfect and for your Punctuation try Grammarly. It is a great app for punctuation. The only problem is that it doesn't have slang so yeah. This is something great thing you are doing for the Teen Wolf fan-fic community so yeah Hope you continue. and

LV 14

yokedjaguar

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LV 3

God_Of_Shinobi

Author needs to come in and like his own book 😀😁😎 hope everyone is having a good day and so are the others and I'm gone..................

LV 2

GodzillinaxD

😂😁😀☺️🙂😔😑😐😶👎🖕. . . . ... . . . . . . . . . .. . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. ..... . . .. . . .. . . .. . .

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Shevaughn_Brown

it is so bad like the frist is just blah and blah it is and it has the wrost charcter ever like sheeeh so yay dont read this it is just horrible and let me tell you about the swearing

LV 13

DogeLuvReadin

Is this a joke? Like this is so bad that i think you puporsly made this horrible.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 13

WealthyBum

I have no idea how someone can rate this 5 stars…😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

LV 13

TaoistXDream

It’s ok but you could put in more detail and clean up your grammar And the story will be just fine i hope you keep working hard and strive to grow your writing -from the dream author

LV 6

TheKindlyGentleman

60 percent of the chapters are author notes and not real chapters. Thats a big problem. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

LV 7

Melshan

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LV 5

Ballad

Hm not gonna waste time writing a review so .................................................................................................

LV 4

Navasu_69

keep improving[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 5

Bofa99

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LV 14

Himanshu_Singh_0870

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LV 3

DarkDei

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