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Synopsis
Just dive into it. I can't guarantee you'll like it. This is not for everyone. But I promise it won't be waste of time. I'm not gonna sugarcoat it though. I'm no expert on writing and how to share feelings, but this might be a tearjerker. Hope you enjoy.
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I mean, I like the story but it doesn't really have a plot, everything is all over the place meaning that lots of stuff in the poem are unnecessary to the plot. It doesn't even have a synopsis. I don't wanna be too hard on you since you are a beginner it's just constructive criticism.