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[UPDATED SYNOPSIS] 11/06/2020 - 1:59 PM
I'm Lax and I receive a system but it has a bug...
I'm 17 years old and when I receive my own system at 18 it turns out that my own system has a bug, I also saw that my system status is very different from the others.
But what I didn't know is that this was just the beginning and there's so much more that's about to happen.
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I don't own the art/photo above there so if you're the owner feel free to contact me if you want me to take it down...
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!!!WARNING!!!
Be aware I'm not good at Grammar so if you are very sensitive when it comes to that, this will novel will probably not mean for you...
!!!WARNING!!!
I'm serious I'm not very good at grammar, It's readable but you might find some error, etc.
Either way ENJOY!!!
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For English as a Second Language, I'd say you're doing a very good job at writing! The grammatical errors are easy to overlook in favor of the interesting take on dystopian future. It's like a wonderful blend of futuristic fiction and fantasy of old. Keep up the good work!
Author here :3 you should definitely read this first before reading the actual novel... First, you should expect some grammatical error like I said a few times already, since I'm using LanguageTool, Grammarly and ProWrittingAid to check my spelling, grammars and other errors I'm also using google to research and find some different words to put it or add to the story so that you don't read the same word over and over again. Second, I'm open to suggestion and critical criticism, you can point out some words or sentence that you find wrong and I will try to fix it as soon as possible. Third, please leave a review or you can comment in the chapter if you want, because reading your feedback about the novel keeps me going and I like reading your reaction. Forth, please enjoy the story as I enjoy writing this <3 *Also I might create ko-fi where you can donate to me, I'm still focusing in the chapters of the story, so I might do that later on, I don't know :D Enjoy :3