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Can we really decide our fate? Or is it just a string pulled since birth?
Kevin KOERSOMBRE is a young and naïve boy, son of a village chief, living a peaceful and eventless life. Until particular one night...
Abandoned by his own parents, and betrayed by the one he trusted the most, his life will turn into a living nightmare;
in a world constantly threatened by the longinus: harbingers of death, lifeforms as ancients as the gods which scare even those immortal beings, wielding an ancient and destructive power: The REGAS.
After being betrayed and hated, after everything he will have faced; will he still save his world, SHCAMERIN, a world governed by the goddess MEETIA and her heroes? Or will he participate in its downfall with the LONGINUS?
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This novel is top notch quality, gives off the pro author vibe. From the extraordinary character development to the wondrous world building, this novel is just excellent. I would totally recommend this :D
Author I am loving your novel I've read to chapter 120 but some areas stands out in your story the annoys me a bit. The part that annoys me is the Mc choices, he refuses at times to use his full power were it can help him avoid trouble or escape. He lets his emotions rule over him a lot, this is explained by his past but it still doesn't feel like he is gaining control over it or improving his control over his emotions. The novel is good and i would hate for you to stop or quit, keep up the great work.
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MC is way too dumb and too emotional I can't read this book. How can you make him have a personality so unbalanced like pick one and stick to it.
This is my review of the first fifty chapters: 1.The novel begins with auxiliary chapters and I recommend reading it before starting to read the novel. 2.The construction of the novel is more than wonderful, with simple errors from the author that you will not notice much ... The main character starts pathetic and I can say that if he does not have the plot armour, he will not live more than 20 chapters. 3.It is easy to notice the naivety of the main character in all the events of the first fifty chapters of the novel from following the evil maid who destroyed his village or following her orders even if he had a chance to escape ... not accepting the fact that his father abandoned him to save his life and the life of his mother, or that his maid is just a spy To a hostile kingdom ... or when he decided to submit to the family of the assassins who originally caused all his suffering and the fact that he apologized for causing the murder of the female assassin who kidnapped him almost made me decide to leave the novel. 4.Even now I can ignore all the mistakes that he did because of his ignorance or his weakness ... But when he was forced to become an assassin from the same hostile kingdom that destroyed his village and is the main cause of all his suffering and all he did is train and train and train only because he was ordered to do, This became extremely absurd. 5.Here what bothers me is the way he treats the people who trained him ... First they are enemies so he is not supposed to befriend them, But if we ignore this point, we can talk about his treatment of his trainer (the only person who cared about him), Although she did not want to treat him harshly or train him intensely because she could not bear to see a child suffering like this, he was treating her coldly and without an appreciation for her concern, Even when he decided to try to stop her from risking her life to save him from execution, all that came in his mind was insulting her and hurting her feelings so that she would stop caring for him. 6.One of the things that surprised me was the fact that he never used his mind even once during the first fifty chapters. 7.Just so as not to misunderstand me ... the author wrote a wonderful novel and the main character's flaws are intended to illustrate his future growth and the difference between his way of thinking before and after the turning point. 8. The main character's turning point or what I hope would be his turning point is Chapter 50 in which he realizes how narrow-minded an idiot he was in making his decisions, I know very well that there is more than one point that should be much better to count as his turning point in the first fifty chapters, but this is what happened so bear with his naivety until then. 9.Mr.author made a good novel so everyone who reads this review just has a try. Read it and you will love what you find. 10.My advice to the author: Try to change the name of the novel because the current name is not attractive at all. Again thanks for your hard work Mr.author, you did a great job.
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Don't give up, sir. Your books is filled with your passion for it. As long as you continue to write, success will follow. Also, I suggest you go premium on this book. Webnovel helps promote premium books with stable updates.
Great story, this novel is within my top 5. Out of the tens of novels I read on this platform, this is top 1. Good luck and cheers author, I really wish to see a full/completed novel of this quality.
First this story has already 100 plus chapters which is a great way for binge reading. The story plot is interesting. The narratives are easy to read and can be perceived well by the readers. The world background is written well. Overall, this book is a great read! Great work author!
This story has an interesting prologue. Even with just the start, this is very hooking. The narration was legit and easy to read. With finishing touches, this will rise above the rest. All in all, a wonderful job creating an awesome novel!
Yep. Its good. It has decent start, intriguing characters, and the first dialogue in the prologue just blew me off by an instant. This book's got potential. 👍👍👍
story is a 6 year old that has been betrayed by family, can't feel anything and expects people to treat him like an adult or he threatens them (with no capability). so a worthless child that insists that he is an adult.
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honestly can't even get into this can't pronounce half the names the full capitalization of last names is annoying if your not going to make the first names the same it's just an overall rough read
I kept my word and leave my review. Please take a look at my book. I want to point out that I haven't read all of them because there are so many chapters First of all, I was impressed by your writing language. You really expressed yourself very well. The structure of the world and the processing of the characters are really nice. The episodes seem a little long but never uncomfortable. I recommend you to read it.
I'm starting to read it now, but due to the comments, I'm looking forward to it. oh...140 I'm starting to read it now, but due to the comments, I'm looking forward to it. I'm starting to read it now, but due to the comments, I'm looking forward to it.
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I came here just to give it a look, but I'm totally hooked right. 😍 The story is on point - same with the style of writing... Can't wait to see what's coming next [img=update]
Really addictive reading. It pisses me off to see a work of such high quality not get many views, while complete crap novels get so many just for including a system. This is a great read, and more people should check this out. Really have to feel for the young protagonist. He is a magnet for suffering. Great lively opening too, with the kid's village getting decimated. Well written, perfect pacing and fantastic world building. A top tier web fiction for sure.
I am so disappointed. This is so good novel yet no one bothers to read it, appreciate it. So less views..... The novel here is kinda new for me though i have read hundreds of novels... it is refreshing, realistic but kinda dark. So much happens to a 7 year old kid. His father abandons him while escaping enemies thinking since he is a child they wont kill him as he would have an advantage as a hostage, also he doesnt know any secrets. He gets betrayed by his caretaker who is a spy. He gets roughed up every now and then, badly brutally beaten up, life on the edge..... never has happy moments... used by others like a pawn... All this happening to him when he is only 7 yrs old, currently 10 yrs..... Writing quality is good, very less errors. story development is awesome but kinda dark and realistic, updates are a little irregular.... MC is a kid, a runt, betrayed, wants to prove himself.... his personality is acceptable coz he was sheltered kid for 6 yrs and then suddenly all the ugliness is thrown to him though he acts too tough for a kid.... Other characters are also realistic with each having own sad back story. Not much is known about world background but from what i read looks like it will be epic and i guess it will war on god level if this book continues. I hope people appreciate this work coz it really is very good. Hope author keeps writing more frequently and regularly