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Hao Ren was left behind by his father in a sect of an acquaintance. Due to his high talent, he attracted extra care from the sect leader and also enemies within the sect. He was sneaked attacked during a battle with the previous number one genius of the sect after he was challenged by him due to jealousy.
One year after being crippled, he went out to search for a rare herb to help with his healing. He accidentally inherited an ancient legacy that not only changes his bloodline but also changed his destiny.
Follow his journey as he rises from the ashes reborn with a unique bloodline and a new mission.
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another good story. it's amazing how each story is made enthralling by so many new authors here. very nice work. This is definitely a good read,
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I've been aware of Eastern Fantasy, although this is one of those novels where I'd actually get the chance to go through it and see what plays out. So far, this is a good story. The plot moves forward with good transition and there isn't any unnecessary telling. Something I would comment on is that some actions scenes are being told rather than shown. This isn't a huge problem but some of them are best relied on imagery and maybe some display of how the character feels as he's in the action sequence. Some paragraphs are also too big in addition, too many sentences. Eventhough I could read them myself but it's best you space them out so it's easier to read, especially for the audience that reads this on mobile. Keep on continuing author. Regardless of my criticism concerning the telling action sequences and big paragraphs this is a good foundation for the novel. Keep on writing.