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What happens when a past super genius transports worlds after 1000+ years and finally awakens?
Thanks to the help of the system he created himself, no one dares to stand in his way.
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This was rather well written and designed however, the background explanation was rather dim and the character seems kind of stupid sometimes. Even so, I look forward to seeing more of this.
hello, author here. since this is my first the writing a story (professionally), I already knew the story wasn't going to be as good as the ones on here. at first I put this on here for fun just to see if people would read it or not, but then people started to comment on it and telling me about the problems so I decided to take it seriously and work on it. I apologize if this story isn't up to your standards, but I can guarantee that it'll get better as I write. :-)
It has a good idea in the description, but so far no world background, the story is just kinda one of those OP all the time characters just doing stupid stuff though with little to no real design for the characters. The description says he was a genius and whatnot but you can't tell that by his actions or anything. Just kind of blah story I guess.
The idea is good, but the implementation is not good. The story is going so fast, world building is unclear. The background of the main character is incomprehensible. Is this the same as his previous world or a new world, and how did he move to this world? The story needs to clarify and solve these problems. I think the novel has potential for growth, so I keep going. I apologize if the writing is incomprehensible. English is not my native language.