DxD: Millenium God

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amaturewriter

long story short I love the powers...chps long and its a good dxd ff. compared to the other shit here its better, way better. MC starts in cannon time but its entertaining, only 6 chps but isnt like other stories where MC follows main cast or something, sure he meets em but its done good so far. plus author fked cannon and added new shit, so here hoping for more. u like smut, its there, dont know how to rate but its there, but not childish [ just check old dxd smut ffs...this is not like that ] so that nice. whilst its kinda cliche its not exaggerated to a stupid extent nor does plot revolve around- how MC looks. this ff actually is one does it good, the author knows how to describe MC's looks and not make story retarded and ruin it. I like that. -- just build relationships, dont make MC or his lovers sluts, if u follow cannon try add new shit, other than that its cool. give MC a good motive for existence. other than that GL - **: i think, the puzzle is the strongest, gives user luck, and in the hands of the protag, one becomes a god

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Nirio

i like it like yami but he can but it would be nice if he had a real friend like saji. ................................................................................................................

LV 13

nonamejestwitness

if it can absorb energy from anything doesn't that mean it can get energy from the planet BTW what happened to his wishes hit the Millennium eye supposed to give one wish to its user.

LV 5

Im_Shrey

Visit Fanfaction.net for whole story this is just copy paste of real work.... Search with the same name... ... ... ...............💤💤💤💤💤💤💤

LV 13

Aeternabilis

Not that great of a story for me tbh. it might be because I love Yugioh as it was my favourite from my childhood. When starting the story I expected it would be about him having the powers of all the items and from these items he would be able to summon monsters to fight for him. As the main powers of the items where they summoned monsters to fight for them during ancient times. All these other effects were minor compared to this. The minor ones where darkness magic, mind-reading, mind control, seeing the past and future, a guide to anywhere you desire, fusing monsters and tons of stuff to do with souls such as judging, sealing, looking into the soul etc. I thought he would have all the items so he can use all these powers. I mean he will the items to summon monsters to fight for him etc Instead he gets magic cards that appear from nowhere that he uses... this makes the main power of the items completely pointless like wtf. Hope this makes sense? The whole thing with spell cards and him stealing gears is annoying and degrades the story for me as well. The spell cards and trap cards etc cam from when pegasus created the game. Making more strategic etc It had nothing to do with the items. The items had the souls of monsters sealed into tablets that fought. The puzzle summoned them into reality instead of using tablets if I remember right. Then the first thing he does in the story is to steal a sacred gear like wtf I wanted to read the story because of the items, not just so he can steal a sacred gear off of the fcking bat... Lastly, I know this isn't really a problem but his name annoys me. His name is called yami atem... but then the pharaoh was called Yami because nobody knew his name. So it was like Yami yugi when talking about him. Later on, he was just called the pharaoh, but when his name came out as atem that was how he is addressed as now. So the whole yami thing bugged me. Should just be called Atem and it would be fine... Was hoping he would have his own guardian spirit he talked to as well ngl... I hope the author gets what I am trying to say with all this? I guess I expected something different or a bit more technical and was left disappointed... Well gl to author and hope this helps anyone who had the same thinking as me.

LV 5

Evil_For_the_WIN

Hope he kill Ddraig or at least enslave him. Hope he control his dragonic instincts and not be controlled by them. Otherwise great novel.

LV 4

dragonstorm09

this story's great wish it was updated more often tho I love yugioh and dxd the the characters powers and how he uses them is amazing I can't wait to see how he doesn't die in three months

LV 4

Eom

İf you don't drop this novel at chapter 5 or chapter 8 then you're great guy(but I'am not) Destroying story with just one chapter... This author a really eye opener...

LV 2

EREBOS

so here we start okay, to be honest I haven't read this novel but from this title it's definitely interesting so don't disappoint the reader okay and don't HIATUS / drop this novel ok ?, so my suggestion is that the author needs to go crazy up chapters and lengthen words in 1 chapter if it can't be long, at most, make it 2 chapters per day so readers will be happy and will give you support so that's all, well, don't drop it okay! hah ... the important thing is to keep the spirit in making this novel goodbye!

LV 5

Sin_of_sloth

I'm not sure why i can't give you powerstones it says "this work dosen't support powerstones" if i could i'd give you i would give all my stones

LV 4

Quetzalcotal

Finally! a dxd fic where MC doesn't Willingly give up his freedom and becomes a SLAVE!!! for that alone , I'm giving this fic 5 stars .......

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goldenswaggerboy

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LV 4

goldenswaggerboy

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LV 5

The_Tube

THIS IS REALLY GOOD!!! GOTTA LOVE THE ATTITUDE OF MC!!! NEED MORE UPDATE!!! .........................................................................