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This novel has been discontinued. I've decided finally to do a rewrite. Check it out! Its now called:
Harry Potter and the Descendant of Merlin.
The main plot will be the same however the story telling is completely different. From third person to first person.
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Amazing ! Truly amazing !!The book is very well written and the chapter length is descent its neither long nor short and I hope the author doesn't drop it and keeps updating it at least weekly.....I'm really happy cuz i stumbled into two really good books today !!This one and the other one is called Rise Of The Magic Emperor-Fairy Tail !!!
My god!, this many good ho novels are starting to rise,this may be the golden era of hp fabrics. This was just amazing,hope you continue and Don't pay heed to hate comments if you see them, they may just want you to stop writing because you're better than those pricks!hope you don't drop this and continue to update it.:).
Yes, the truth is, I don't know how this work has so much audience I'll make it simple, it's not good ... the MC has no ambitions or a goal, it only learns magic because it has it, that's all, as in many fic cliches, it wants to help and engage relationships with the original mc making the work a follow-up to the canon, it does not aspire to show us something new or innovative about the magical world .. despite its desire it is super silly it does not take advantage of its potential at all nor does it have the smoked theories that every good fic has .. there are many things to emphasize in this work, it is not for me thank you author, I hope you improve
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Love the fic, My only recommendations would be to limit the cultivation aspect and focus more on the magic. Elemental spells in Harry Potter ten to get neglected, perhaps explore bloodline traits like parseltouge and metamorphmagus. They had to come from a ritual or a contract of sorts๐ค. since all gen1 wizards start from nothing, Honestly It would probably be more entertaining if oz doesnt limit himself and just test out of Hogwarts and just applies for the dark arts position himself after he explored the wIzarding world himself for a year. fics tend to always revolve around hogwarts the whole time. Especially since oz had almost already finished WIth the hogwarts library, Maybe head to romania and go see some dragons, instead of waiting for the goblet of fire. Could probably Do a little crossover wIth something else that matches the setting.
This is a "god gives me wishes" story. ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........
While I did like the Book to a certain extent, it isn't amazing or fantastic or outstanding in any way or form and all the other 5-Star reviews don't know shit, typical Chinese if you ask me. Don't get me wrong, it isn't that bad, but the author made a really bad job with Original characters and I can't in any shape or form understand how the author can portray such amazing Characters in such a bad way! I would understand people changing characters so that they fit their world/Nobel but the author 'said' that he follows canon so the CH isn't changed. The Grammar is decent, and that's all I have to say. If the author wants to know how many stars I gave him in each category, then comment, because I am too lazy at the moment.
deleted my old review, someone told me the author changes the canon and made harry in slytherin so i look it up and its actually true and then change my review, also good job to the author for not following canon specially he interferes and made harry go to slytherin and probably harry wont need to go back to the dursley, and you're right the butterfly effect is already strong it won't be possible to make everything the same as canon
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Just finish reading till the latest chapter (50), and here's my review. The story development is good, it have a sense of direction meaning, atleast there is a good plot apart from the Canon. Writing quality is good and the author reviews the past chapters which is a another plus point. The author actually know how to use the '' authors thought '' which is rare from my past experience with the other novels. All in all, I give you my support author and keep writing.
Who the love interest ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ??? ?? ?? ยฟ? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ยฟ? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ??? ??
Uma histรณria interessante, mas infelizmente รฉ baseada em um sistema [central]. No comeรงo eu acho que o autor tinha muito conhecimento sobre o mundo de Harry Potter, mas o sistema [central] mostra que o autor vรช o mundo como um [conto de fadas] com mana e habilidades especiais. (O conhecimento determina o poder do mago, nรฃo coisas como mana e etc ... que faz a magia ter uma explicaรงรฃo lรณgica, algo que nem existe nos livros, a รบnica coisa que existe sรฃo as regras) [google tradutor]
Great book I guess, could be better without some clichรฉs. I always seem to like original ideas more than inspirations from other fanfictions.
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I love how the MC didn't go full wuxia and he actually acknowledges his mistakes and shortcomings. This is a very enjoyable story. Great job!
Rebirth - Yes Wish - one and the MC go for eidetic memory Mc I am reborn and its my Job to help/save canon MC - Yes -------------------------------------
I abso-fuckin-lutely love your novel dude , please keep up , it's like a breeze of fresh air , at last , someone remembered that merlin is the No.1 wizard in all myths , comics , novels etc ... of all. your portray of your main character made me absolutely ๐ฏ love it , great novel , man , keep up , you are doing absolutely marvelous.
Hey guys the author here. Thought I should give a quick note about this fanfic. I'd like you all to understand before reading that this is the first story I've ever truly written properly. With that, there will be errors and mistakes at times and you all need to understand that before going into read it. I'm sure there's a million better ways to do certain things however I was only ever planning on writing this as something to occupy my spare time, next thing I know im climbing the power/collection rankings and I have a decent amount of people commenting each chapter. I'm grateful for all the comments and reviews so far and do take criticism to heart in order to improve myself but if you expect perfection, go read another novel. Some great novels HP novels I can recommend are The rise of the protector and I'm Voldemort. Thanks! :)