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Two broken souls.
One prophecy.
One sacrifice.
Ivory fate was prophesied from she was born, she was to be sacrificed. To her, that's the worst kind of fate anyone can get bound to.
But not all sacrifices are meant to be. Just as all souls are not to be barter for. Definitely not the one tied to Vald, who is more destructive than helpful.
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The story just flows like water, it can get you so hooked! I didn’t see any fault as I was just engrossed in reading. Amazing job author-san! Keep it rolling ❤️✨
OH MY GOD! this book is so hooking, the synopsis and the beginning just captures your attention and once you start, you can't stop. I like the plot, the characters and how the author created everything!
I really like the world background and how I can basically picture the characters in my head. I really like the originality you have. Great job keep it up!!!!
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. The characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
so far so good, I have been left speechless, amazed and mesmerised, I don't know how some people write do good. Although the book just started but I already love Shahira a lot.
An interesting storyline with a decent plot and intriguing characters. The MC's feelings are portrayed vividly in every line of text, an extraordinary stunt to pull. Can't wait for more, Author-sama!
A classic tale that all women pine for: when you are all alone in the world and you meet the one that you know your are fated to be with. Great beginning. No dilly dallying; the story gets to its business right away. The MC meets the (possibly) ML, and the ML clearly feels pull. Chemistry is awesome and so are the characterizations. Very clean. Very few typos and grammatical errors that in no way hamper the flow or the meaning of the story. Great job, author. I will continue to read and hope you continue to write.
Ok I am loving this so far. I love the descriptions of the characters and how its clear what their emotions are. It is a very interesting story. The chapters are short and to the point which I absolutely love. I honestly can't wait for the rest. Great Job so far author.
Interesting premise. It was interesting and I liked most of the aspects. The ending of the first chapter was really something. No spoilers but it really did intrigue me. however, I'd say this isn't perfect, nothing is. Though some edits and perhaps a little bit of proofreading could take this to another level. Highly recommended to everyone who wants a good read.
The story plot is interesting. I read the published chapters, I think the plot is unique and great too. I like it a lot! Keep working! It's great!
Unique and hooking plot! The synopsis is interesting and so is the character design. Right from the beginning, readers can already tell a good upcoming development from the main protagonist. The first few chapters have a fairly average storytelling yet compelling nevertheless. Writing quality can still be improved. However, grammar can only be a minor detail. The pace of the story is quite good so far 😊 Overall, this is such an intriguing read!
Alright. I've read the first three chapters. My conclusion: It has potential. There needs to have some proofreading and editing of the sentences, though. Many little mistakes add up, yet if the Author takes their time to revise, I'm sure they can fix those. Author, I'd suggest learning about the famous "show don't tell". Since you tend to rely on abstract adjectives and telling the reader what the character heard or felt, rather than making them experiencing it. The story is also standard but well-executed. My grade is 4. It has its problems, yet with proper work, it can be improved upon.
After reading several chapters, I can see this novel's potential! The writing is vivid and the characters are interesting. The plot picks up fast and you immediately get to the good parts. Keep writing, author!
Writing Quality - The writing is pretty good, no major complaints other than the minor spelling or grammar mistakes. I would think to give a 4/5 because of this but I have hope the author will go back and fix those mistakes. So please do that author :) [5/5] Stability of Updates - Nothing much to say here, it seems to be on a proper schedule so [5/5] Story Development - My thoughts right after finishing the first chapter were "well that went south quickly". Pretty impressed with how the story is headed. [5/5] Character Design - Here's the problem I have with the character, from what I've read I believe the main character is 8 years old in the beginning (correct me if I'm wrong). If I am correct though, it doesn't make sense for an 8 year old to be thinking of marriage. I guess from a fictional point of view, it would make sense if in her world it was the norm. That's the only problem I had but there are many possible reasons as to why that might have happened so I'll let it slide. [5/5] World Background - Lastly, the world building is actually really good in my opinion. Right from the start, it talks about sacrificing people for power which could hint to magic, (not quite sure so I'll read more of the story). It's really fascinating to look at it from the main character's father's point of view. He's so absorbed in hunger for power that he stopped caring for his child. Could've turned out to be a really complex character. [5/5] Well done author! Keep up the great work!
wow! just loved it, the start of the novel is very exciting! the feelings of the Characters are very well conveyed, I hope the Author keeps it up. Stay safe and healthy author!