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After a failed attempt to escape from enemy soldiers, the spear-wielding Yana had to face death due to falling alongside Aria, the princess of the kingdom he lived in.
Accompanied by the aid of a mysterious lady deep down on the seafloor, they were able to transfer their souls onto a new world as reborn individuals. However, they got separated far when the reborn procession was going.
From there on, Yana strived to clear his regret by finding her in the strange world where the sea didn't even taste like salt. All that to fulfill a promise: living together with her in a peaceful land.
He would eventually learn element control that was possible in that world, encounter man-beast with distinct abilities, discovering new places, and face hardships in his journey to finish his wish.
He would be accompanied by a unique arsenal that the world didn't have, the saltwater.
Would he be able to prove if he deserved a second chance?
To answer so, his second life began.
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Novel with slowburn and careful exposition about the world. Characters are slowly revealing and the mc really has to learn about the new world.
First, let's get all of the negatives out of the way. There are a lot of times where it gets kind of awkward to read, you have quite a few grammatical errors, and on a few occasions, I had to input my own words to make a complete sentence. Other than that, the story is really, really, interesting! Yana and Aria's dynamic is pretty wholesome and cute, and you can tell even before Yana gets reincarnated that they have some long standing history together. The lady that they meet in the sea, reminds me of 'The Lady of The Lake'. I like how this new world has their own language that Yana now has to learn, and how he must now get strong enough to search for the Lady's body so that he can be reunited with Aria. All of this is just a new perspective in the fantasy genre, and it's so unique that it's interesting! This is most definitely going to go far, and I'll be cheering you on every step of the way!!
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A very interesting premise with characters that have an interesting dynamic unusual for this type of story AND without falling into any obvious stereotype. The setting is interesting and opens up to an interesting world. The story comes short in the quality of the writting. Although there are very little obvious spelling mistakes, the verb tenses are a bit all over the place and can make reading confusing. It improves in the later chapters but still needs work. Overall good read! Keep up the good work!
The story is extremely different from the other fantasy novels I've read, and I have to say it's one of the finest. The characters are really detailed. Aside from a few things that need to be edited, the writing is quite nice. Also, acquire a nice cover to attract more readers, as this book merits it. Best wishes! continue your journey. I would appreciate if you took a look at my novel as well. It would be much appreciated
The plotline is very unique compared to the other fantasy novels I've read and I gotta say it's one of the best ones. The characters are quite well-detailed. The writing is pretty good apart from some stuff that needs editing. Also do get a good cover which would attract more readers and this book deserves that. All the best! keep going
I found the plot of this story very unique and intriguing. The characters are quite well-depicted. The writing is good. This story is quiet promising with loads of potential. Slight editing would help it improve so please consider that author. Rest all, definitely a great story and worth a try if you're interested in this genre.
5/5 !!! Will definitely read some more! The only thing that I could point out this time around is the book cover. You better find one and attract those readers, 'cause I know this novel is going to blooom!!!! [img=recommend] I commented everything that I think needs fixing. Feel free to disagree since we have different writing styles
The book is well-written and the author has a good descriptive style and the narration is great enough. The plot is interesting and currently being built up very rigidly by the author and the suspense and light hint of mystery is a nice boost. The main characters are well designed, especially their relationship and emotions towards each other. The only issues I have seen were very small and were fixed by the author. The only other issue with the book is the cover, that would fail to attract readers. I advise author to use Webnovel's free covert art maker or the hordes of, other software that allow you to do so. Keep up the good work!
A beautifully crafted story. Great use of words and a beautiful theme that has been portrayed so well. I love the characters too. This story is Definitely worth a vote
The plot is intriguing and the concept is unique. The writing style is descriptive making it easier for the readers to immerse in the story. Editing the story would improve the story more but all in all, good work, author!!
Interesting so far. Good story with developped characterization and good pacing. A small advice, do break down your big paragraphs, it'll help the readability. There are weird turn of phrases too, but keep writing and will improve by itself.
An isekai with mystery is quite an unusual mix, but hey I'm into it. So far the story is adequate enough with the environtment explanation and subtle enough to not break the immersion. Keep on going!