The Flower of Soline

LV 3

YueLqn

I like it! The plot is well developed, main character isn't freaking out and making a ruckus, instead he observes and asapts. although there are few chapters, Im looking forward to reading the rest!

LV 14

pyxi

I don't know if it was just me, but when I first started reading this, I expected Aether to be one of those smart, cunning, apathetic characters that are good at everything. I love characters like that as it can be tiring reading about characters that are kind of dumb, dense, crybabies. But Aether is perfect. He seems just like a real person. He's smart and he knows how to get what he wants, but throughout the story we've also seen that he is a real human with emotions. He gets scared, he cries, and he cares about others. It's realistic. I'm not going to say this novel is perfect, nothing is. I'm not going to say it deserves to be a bestseller, because I know it could be better. However, I like it. I think it's good. I look forward to every new chapter. I can't wait to see where the story goes. I'm always wondering what new things we'll learn along the way. Maybe, this story isn't for you. And that's okay. But it is the kind of story that I want to read. There aren't very many chapters out yet, and you can tell it's going to be a long story. I don't know where it will take me. I don't know what to expect. But right now, I'm hanging on the edge of my seat, waiting for more.

LV 1

LilyTwT_

This is top tier. The plot is so good and the characters are well written. Aether is the best example for the perfect main character. especially in the beginning of the story. He didn't freak out and started observing. Not to mention the writing, it's so good and it makes me so invested in the story. Overall i love this so much 😭

LV 14

Novelreader12333

Great story I like the plot and i like the character and how he is smart and uses his knowledge. for example i read many novels where the character immediatky asks who they are while in this one he was smart about it and tried not to arouse suspicion

LV 11

Amasu

This surely one of the best novels I've read on this website, even if it only has 32 chapter so far. Every chapters has content and depth to it. The main and side characters have diversive personalitys, they are made understandable why they're acting the way they do. Furthermore the worldbuilding is just great, there is a ton we reader's don't know about the world yet and that makes it even more mysterious and exciting because we will get to know it slowly by surely with the MC. I also think the flow and pace is just perfectly fine, the reader can follow everything pretty well and it never gets boring. To the author, pls keep it up 🙏your story is amazing so far, every chapter surpassed my expectations and imagination. Thx 😊!

LV 4

alice_76

I love the story and your writing style its very interesting, I also like the mysterious ness it makes me want to read more, I just catched up in like a day. I also just want to say when you describe a character could you be a bit more specific with like hair and face? I find it hard to imagine nox when you say short hair, hair color and eye color for him, but other than that everything is 100/10. keep going i love your work and you are amazing!!

LV 13

NobodyxydoboN

I love the story so far! Every time there's a new chapter I'm so excited to see what happens next. It's interesting and well written. [img=update]

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