Nobody will ever know

LV 4

Lasyandra

still at the synopsis.. so, for the MC.. you're gonna die anyway, so just shout, "ALEXA, PLAY UNRAVEL!" .

LV 2

AnotherAtlas

It's not a bad novel, but it's really not my cup of tea. It's also sometimes confusing. Lots of emotional stuff, which I find quite boring after a bit. I'd give it about a 3.5

LV 13

real777

amazing overall love the story so far hope you keep up the good work : )

LV 5

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

It's alright if childhood fics with foreign names in a Japanese naming setting don't put you off. The mc is called Veronica... To me that instantly yanks me out of any emersion I could achieve. It also shows a lack of character design and story development making this feel like something written by someone with little true love for the essence of what makes the Naruto series special. In fact, if you change the known naruto names and place names for ones not from naruto, you would likely never infer it was a naruto verse story due to how long it stayed in the childhood stage. Its an alright story, but its not a Naruto Fanfic. It's just a fiction using some names and locations that coincidentally are like those uses in the naruto anime. So yeah. I gave it this score because the story, world and character are not at the level they should be for a fanfic, and aren't developed enough for an original story.

LV 13

WetAppleDream

for now, i will change the review later. keep going on and update, also, how does the MC look like?[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 13

MEA_24_

it's really good I recommend this to anyone. hope to those want to read won't miss out all the good reading.................................

LV 12

Shujinko_Josei

Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!