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Reborn to become a heavenly serpent.
4.71 (37 ratings)
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Hiro, a youthful soul from the blue star was forcibly reincarnated in a new and strange world into a little snake body.
In this world, the concept of a planet doesn't exist other than the endless table of regions. The endless pursuit of power with the almost eternal journey of strength.
"Then by becoming the strongest existence, can I finally have a good sleep?"
(Yes host)
"Alright then"
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To me, it's interesting to read this story not because the storyline only, it also have it's own evolution, and the writing is unique. For example, the MC asking the system to list down his ability. I hope he'll make some improvement, especially his grammar. That's all from me.
overall i really like this book, the world building and story progression is good, and it is one of the few web novels with systems that are actually good, the system isn't bratty or smug and does its job when it needs to. The protagonist too is good, he feels like a person that can actually exist and have overall good personality. So in conclusion give this story a try, its some of the few good ones in this site (i am writing this review to motivate the author as i am genuinely hooked up to the story and don't want this to be dropped) (sry for my english, its not my first language)
overall i cant really say much since this book barely have less than 10 chapters. But the style of how the author explaining the situation is great.
nicely done. I really like novels where the mc is not a human. The way the author wrote this book is very amazing!. Im hoping for more chapters!! ๐๐๐
To be honest. The story is pretty good and well written. But the side storys, in which side characters are introduced are way to long. Tbh it feels like there are less chapters about the mc then there are about side characters. And even if the focus shifts back to the mc its not rly relevant or a major part of the story. Last time he just ate/consumed some rocks and talked with a weird lazy silver guy. And the impact these side characters at the end have arent nearly worth the chapters it took to introduce them and flesh out there personality. (at least the last time) The last "antagonist" (the dude with the weird item) just randomly got eaten by the mc after his plotarmor broke. It just feels stretched and unaccessary. Anyway i hope this isnt the case with this New bad guy and i hope that there will be more focus on the actual mc of the story. Currently at chapter 49 Hope you have a great day. Bye
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loving the work. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ I hope author can explain more about the what type of snake Hiro is... and maybe about his past? anyway keep up the amazing work ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Hoping that the author could see this. Im truly amazed on how the author used certain rare words here and I enjoyed the story line a bit. Though the chapters are quite not up to date for the most part but I believe if this book were to be given enough time accumulating chapters after chapters, it will surely attain the recognition it deserves. I hope the author wont forget about the system in the near future chapters.
First time reading this type of book. A very refreshing start although it was a bit too fast. Love how the mc interact with the system and the fighting scene was well made.
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I like this story, especially how the author named these characters ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ. Anyways sometimes the words are a bit confusing but it takes time to understand. GREAT JOB!๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ
Everything was good until the character Dรญa came into play. Story started deviating towards something unknown and narrow. I only wish the story will be good in future. But the story seems to be out of my play. World background is not clear and sudden appearance of characters make it hard for me to follow. The characters don't have any substance but they are there in the story.
its not a bad read. . . . . ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Great work. Just need more frequent updates....... . . v..... . . .. . . . . . .. v.. . .. v.v.. v.. . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . v.v... . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. ... .. .. . .. . .. .. . . .. . .. . . .. .
A novel with great potential. I read the 1st chapter only and I will go back to reading as soon as I complete writing this review! Hope you keep updating with long chapters!
I havenโt Read it yet Iโm Fonna read it but if you see this please answer Does the main character have multiple Heads like on the cover page or not and if he does, they are different From the main head [the main character] like different personalitys and stuff if u do answer this thank you.
am I seeing things or was it the chapter supposed to be 67 or something? [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Keep that momentum you can do it!!! Ganbatte kudasai!!! Fighting!! Hope there any Mangaka want to visual your light novel and soon become the best light novel like tensura
this is a great story and while there are some mistakes along the way with writing and side characters which was already mentioned and addressed so this is great. if I could pay for more updates I would
Friendly notice: English is not my first/main language and as such I'm not that great at it. If dear readers notice any grammatical errors or dear readers have an interesting suggestion. Please do let me know.