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Mc gets reincarnated into an immortal cultivation world. He gets a chance to choose his race. He chooses the Saiyan race.
He is not an ambitious person but who likes to be weak? In a world filled with dangers can his background always save him.
He can't cultivate immortals so what will he do?
It's my first time writing a novel just to pass some time and English isn't my first language, but I will try to improve it. Feel free to give me your reviews. I am also thankful to all those guys who have pointed my grammar and other mistakes.
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I think the story has a lot going for it, it just really REALLY needs better grammar there were times when I had to re-read it to understand what I just read, at a point in the story I just could not continue and had to skim. Grammar Grammar Grammar it is really really important.
One thing I have found nagging on this story, and I'm not targeting the author about, the grammar has to improve. My brain cells refuse to move past the first chapter, but acknowledges that there is a decent plot and a promising future developement. The Character has the same run-of-the-mill start, he dies and gets isekai'd. Though when I read something I need a clean story with punctuation and great update times. Other than that I could see this story blossom in the future.