Martial Spirit Evolves from Mandala Snake

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Firefist_02

You can have more readers if add tag douluo dalu. If you try to find love interest i recomenden zhu zhuing. I hate Dai mubai and how i can see you too. And its be good if mc learn chakra manupilating from naruto

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Nether_Exalt

As the shameless translator, I claim 5 stars for my writing quality, the stability of my updates, the development of my story and 5 stars for my world background.

LV 13

LastWolf

The plot is amazing, the concept of it is also nice and I look forward to the future chapter, continue updating and don’t drop it halfway I see potential

this book is taken from the stolen chinese version. Xitixfxotidtgododtdtodtitiddtidotdktxgkxotdoggoddgodgkglddgkdkgzgkzgkzkggksgldlsgdgldgldylglsstllstdglldglydldydlgdglgldglsltsldgdylyldgdlgdlgldgldgldglddglldgdgldgldgl

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rackthethird

I need more pls

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ToonDragonable

So stolen Fic uploading because you cannot write on you're own? BTW I know that you will delete this Review in Orde to get other's to go to you're Pat**** Page. xp

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DaoistdEF6ZG

update update update update update update update c

LV 3

Meta0202

thanks for such a cool fanfiction I want more chapters, there are almost no mistakes in the text the story is also well-behaved although it was not clear in the initial chapters but gradually you started to improve so continue this story and don't quit

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GodPL

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LV 11

Max87097

One of best written and translated fan-fic that i have read till now. Thanks for the chapter. please update more i have become addicted to the story

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wm_ali

nice story and set up. I hope a good story. I llike how make a limit to Nerf. it's make the story progres more interesting. nice system. more update pleassssssseee.

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LV 11

It's a good novel , please continue writing it, I wish you dear author all the best. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Ezzaldien_s

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