In One Piece as the Monkey King!?

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AnimeFan_OG

Ahh finally a Sun Wukong fanfic. I am currently at chapter 9 and i tell you this is soo good! It's writing is good. The story is perfect and it's overall just an masterpiece. Definetly recommended!

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Juice_9768

the concept is good and very unique from what I've seen. Unfortunately, the writing quality is eh and the author is unable to paint a clear picture of his story. Has potential if he learns how to tell one I guess

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Dieudonner_17

My only problem with this book is more of my personal preference I am tall When i read the book i take myself as the mc(so im in the book at the time i read it) so it feels weird to me when the mc is like 5’10 and im 6😂😂😂 Sans this everything is on point Ok grammar ok writing and lovely plot to keep me going

Jin Mori is kinda OP for this world…..but I don’t really care. Once it isn’t butchered.Also check me on watpad Daoof there is supposed to be a copy and paste of your book their.

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Rimuru_Tempest0

have not read it yet but the premise of a sun wunkong fanfic is just to good to pass up so please dont drop this fanfic and if you dont then than you

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Mankeylover911

Never watched One Piece just saw Moneky King also came from watpad. Books great just little chapter so imma come back when you have around fifty or som.

….Came from Whatpad tho looks like it was someone else posting your work broski Drpopkicked a kid in the chest cuz he was tryna trap my girl let.

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Babarunderwataoh

Skidapap Boom done know, two plus two is four mi us one that's three quick maths. Everyday man's on the block spoke tree, see your girl in the park that girl is and uccers

Its preety good, even with the lack chapters its a good read. It seems that his power is similar to that of the Monkey King from both Journey to the West and God of Highscool. Overall it's a good read, not the best but that could change in the near future........

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Baldysalino

the story isn't bad, but the grammar needs a lot of work, most sentences don't make much sense. because of that, the story is very hard to understand, I suggest editing chapters before going further into the novel, otherwise, things won't work out

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FIENDCELESTIAL

The story idea and cocept is certainly nice, as is the introduction of the main character. BUT that aside the story and narration is all over the place , makes 0 sense and is just mostly jumping from point to point without an accurate story design , making it more than a tad unreadable

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OnlyCanRead

Really a story with a LOT of potential, the mc's background is original, there's character development after the timeskip wich I really liked, it doesn't feel forced till now cause there's a legit justification and explanation for the mc's character, It's understandable. I'm currently in chapter 10

Exp is my Hsepard and Exp is my God. I came from Watpad as well and my name is the sword. I’m one with the world as it is with me. The very fabric of existence bows to me. BANKAI:SENBONZAKURA KAGEYOSHI!

Going strong so far?!?

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Daoof30Forced

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Fuehrer

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