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Umbrus Shade, The Incredibly Annoyed Ravenclaw
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It all began with a dark room, a hooting owl, and a letter in front of me.
The room had no features I could parse. The owl was motley brown. The letter looked handwritten in a really difficult cursive. My room was gone. My surroundings were gone. The letter itself glowed with a light of its own, and the contents seemed to shift under my sight.
HOGWARTS SCHOOL of WITCHCRAFT and WIZARDRY
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This is the fanfic that make me star reading others HP Fanfic’s. Is great that i can read it again in web novel format. Hope that you ask permission from the author.
This is a gem and I just couldn't leave it on average rating of below 4. Basically it's an entertaining read with a funny mc that leaves you appreciative of his stupidly clever ways of solving problems.
Rating may change but so far it will not. There is a 0% chance that other reviews were not deleted from this fanfic. The MC is a complete moron, and he wants to find Dumbledore to tell him everything that he knows. So this story is already bad with an MC like that. Then he somehow is unable to do the most simple spells and once he finally does the spell… he messes it up. But the teachers then reward the MC with points for failing to do the spell and not even doing it correctly. There has been little to no dialogue and is just a summary after summary of an idiot MC. Honestly, as of right now I suggest to not waste your time reading this fic.
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It's pretty basic HP fanfic with an OC MC. It has two plot-lines going on. One MC learning magic, and while his starting point isn't great, it doesn't take long for him to start getting OP. Though there isn't any secret to it really other than him putting in most of his time and effort that a lazy child wouldn't. And room of requirement. (overall this plot-line is very basic but well executed) The other is MC dealing with the problems that come from the canon storyline. And well... things go very smoothly for him all the time. I will give it some props for MC dealing with stuff himself, rather than baby sitting Harry Potter like most fanfics do, but nonetheless, the ease at which MC deals with each problem without any problems arising make it boring. So ultimately, I would settle for this being rather average HP Fanfic, though someone that didn't read many HP fanfics could probably appreciate it more than me who read through this formula several times and seen better.
The worst hp fanfic I have ever had the misfortune to read. Magic has 0 explanation or depth. The m.c can't tell anyone of the knowledge he has , yet he can do things somehow which contradicts itself. For example he tries to tell dumbeldore the future and something like fate or destiny prevents Dumbledore from hearing him ,but he hears something else instead?? We aren't even told what Dumbledore heard exactly. Just the mc goes on about the story of h.p and Dumbledore go uh huh uh huh Them ok bye..... like wtf?.there is tons of handwavium going on throughout this book.. I don't understand how anyone likes this book at all. It's a contrived mess that makes me wish ill upon the original author. Its straight trash. The only redeeming quality is the actual writing. The story itself makes little to no sense. Don't waste your time reading it or trusting the fake reviews. The story will irk anyone with a logical mind.
I like the story...MC is odd don't do think that he don't want and tell dumbeldore everything but get dismiss by a candy...well push those thing aside it's nice story but lack of something that I don't know
Its really funny espesialy how the mc's expectations fail again and again...................................................................
One of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have ever read(I have read a lot including pretty much all of the ones available in this site).
I remmber reading this on ffnet or spacebattles long time ago if youre the same author good, otherwise you can basically read this whole thing on one of the 2 sites, just google its a completed story
I love it; I wish it had a few more chapters explaining what the trio would do at the end, but that is not that important and can be easily interpreted by the story flow in our heads for a more open-ended ending.
Definitely one of the best Harry Potter fanfic out there. The only bad/sad part is that it ended too soon. I wish it had continued for at least one more year in the story. I was not ready for the goodbyes at all. 😭😭😭😭😭
I like it it's a good story but I can't get into it the only reason I started reading it was because of the tags attached to it a few of them match the storyline but not all of them it said hi IQ but he's not acting smart at all all he has is modern knowledge but that's it
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The best hp fanfic on the site. Has good update speed and progression. This story is fire. Here is 5 stars to keep you going.
one of best novel I have ever read. This is not fanfiction it's literature, Shakespearean stuff. It gets confusing at start and MC feels like living like a third person but it definately gets better.
this is probably the most well written Harry Potter book I have ever read. .................................................. ..........
I am rarely rewiewing any story at all, but this one was just too nice not to. Liked every aspect of the story so far and just wanted to say it. Thank you
This fic is a certified hood classic. One of the best HP fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading and probably one of the best fics I've read on this site. The author should get a medal or something.
I like how the MC struggles with some aspects of magic. The difficulties he endures while attempting to learn transfiguration adds to the realism of the fanfic. One piece of advice: don't turn it into a harem.
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This is actually a good story. Not every Hp fanfic needs to have a character that is extremely talented from the get-go at everything. Also while I can agree that certain actions from the protagonist touch on the "forbidden list" of stuff to do in an HP fanfic, I don't think it detracts from the story.