Ultimate Upgrade in DC

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Kevin_Pollard

lol, I thought he was going to be a Technomorph not a kid with Technokinese. haha, I got baited. shamed.

LV 2

SAURON_

wished you involved more of justice league or maybe even have him get a little raven as a lover eventually also what happened to his father? picture below is a funny moment.

LV 2

CephJester

Great story so far, and amazing potential for plot development! The writing quality is pretty good, albeit with the occasional spelling error. The stability of Updates is decent, considering the length of the chapters and how the author is doing other works. Story development has been well-paced so far, and entertaining. And lastly, the character and world designs/backgrounds flow nicely together, and allow us readers to understand what is going on in the world, and for the author to manipulate certain aspects without going full-blown "AU" on us.

LV 5

TyrantTron335

Hope that MC won't like Batman no killing Rules, Also Never Reveal That MC Identify to others because MC isn't Invincible or MC parents are Powerful enough to protect themselves.

LV 15

FoolishPanda_25

I like the story it's entertaining and I really enjoy just watching him do different things with his unique powers but he's not perfect like all the other mc.

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AinzO0alGown

Waste of time Should have skipped the whole useless reborn arc he's an alien for gods sake so yeah.........................................

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DaoistMRvi7m

hey dude when can you continue this story it's pretty good

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Kami12

This is a great story but the update is slow. I do hope the author keeps up the great work. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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In_destructible

Hope this story and your majin fix last long they are actually good👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌