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Earl, a planet similar to earth yet different. Here roams the mythological beings away from the preying eyes of humans. The Pride's a family of dire-wolves unfortunately have drawn the short end of the straw as they are stuck trying to save their lives from fearless witches, backstabbers in their pack and take care of their own family dynamics. Such as trauma, past lovers and suddenly becoming parents. This is the story of the Prides.
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Good read, Grammer was good, read through the story without any breaks.Was able to get a good grasp of the world and main character from only 1 chapter. I would say great first chapter keep it up.
It was a good start. The synopsis is very interesting but you need to worry on paragraph spacing. Except that, everything is good. Keep it up
Oh, is this your first work?! It's quite good, honestly. You still need to learn paragraph spacing btw, which is very important in WN, but anything other than that, you're pretty much good! You have imagination, your grammar good! keep up the good work!
Congratulations on starting to write this book, I hope you develop it into a great story. My first impression is that you are quite good at this, as the paragraphs flew quickly when I was reading the first chap, no waste of time and no 'flow break.' I liked the way you wrote about the character's thoughts and feelings, even if only in the first chap. I sense a huge potential coming from it.
This is a good read and i'll absolutely follow it up but...is the tragedy tag for reals? that tag always scare me in a novel! but apart from that all is good!