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"All I wanted was for you to love me,"
Karme de Serin was used to being ignored, especially next to a perfect twin sister. They looked exactly alike, but Krianna was the rose of the de Serin clan, while Karme was a thorn in her father's side.
As Karme lost hope of gaining her father's love, she was thrust into an arranged marriage. Would she be able to find the love she seeks in a man she had never seen before? Or is Karme fated to be alone forever?
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Nicely written book, no doubt about that. The plot is fresh and easy going without any sort stops or confusions.
Hoping that i will not die in this story When will be the next chapter released? Cant wait to read it 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭 Baka sensui to
Alright here we go, a perfect 5 star from me for the following reasons: 1)The prologue is very engaging, despite it's short length ,the author has used simple yet impactful descriptions. The scene comes off as one you would see in an anime or a webtoon! and the ending line certainly gives the goosebumps! 2)The FL Karme is a gentle soul ,although shunned by others we see glimpses of her strength when she chooses to bury herself in the books she loves despite her father's wrath. 3)The attendant Maya is mature and a source of comfort to our dear Karme. There is more to discover about her but for sure she adores the De Serin Lady very much. 4) The story flows very well as the author crafts it with simple and complex sentences that are also not difficult to understand. The style gives off a sort of aristocratic feel which is perfect for this novel's genre. 5) I do very much love the use of words of different languages, it already exposes us to the era and world of the story setting and sets a good pace for world building. 6)Our beloved ML, ah much to learn about you but I approve of your faithfulness. 7)Each character has depth and can be distinguished from each other by their distinct personalities. The character's personalities are not redundant which is good. and last but not least I will continue to read this new masterpiece. Kane chan is back and with a big bang! best of luck sister!
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It's... Mid Tier for me. It is hard to follow, and the updates, which, the webnovel has just started, can't be properly judged. However I found the characters... Good. I suggest updating every chapter a day, make it easier to follow, explore more of the world, and it is good to go.
Fantastic work of art here, I like how the prologue goes, it goes really hard, I want more chaptersssssss, author should bless us with more chapters
Well written and a good story, the plot is nice and story is quite easy to read with an interesting Mc and it has a lot of potential, good job!
This book is really great. I did enjoy every bit of it and can easily be related, it has great potential and I can't wait to read more, please update more chapters author plesssseeee.
Love the pace, love the concept, love the build up, the tension, love the characters, love how the story's going! Overall, I love it. I think this book contain everything that I like :) Keep up the good work, Author! Good Luck!
This novel is amazing! Obviously written by an experienced writer. Few flaws in grammar, and the story telling is well above average. P.S: You should probably make the chapters a little longer. P.P.S: Great job. All the Best!
I can tell that the novel is written by an experienced writer, it was enjoyed short good ready, with its quality writing is top-notch with its slow pace, I can tell this novel will last long until the ending. I can't tell if this novel is daily or not, I might check it from time to time to kill time. Story development was decent and interesting with all characters well described from their appearance and personality alone. however, my only problem is that some of the chapters are kind of short.
MUHAHAHAHA HERE COMES THE FIRST REVIEW Another masterpiece from Kane-chan❤️❤️ Writing is flawless as usual, story is heart gripping and characters are amazing as alwayssss, I'm rooting for Karme to take revenge for all her family did to her😡😡😡 And also ML, WHERE ARE YOU-- COUGH! okay, spoilers anymore welpz welps Before I spoil anymore, please read this masterpiece guys. And also, Good job Author Kane-chan, keep it up!!
Pretty great start to the story, there is one thing that's a bit bugging, but not really. And, that's, the discrepition, you tend to go too in depth with it, but, since the writing it great, it's not that bit of a problem. Give the story a chance, and I am sure you will have a nice reading time!
The story was fantastic. The story's opening line piqued my interest. It had an intriguing prologue, and you really went all out in that section. Readers will be captivated by your story. The writing was excellent, with well-developed characters and backgrounds. The way you developed the story was unique and unlike any other style of writing I've read. Excellent work, author.[img=recommend]
SHAMELESS REVIEW FROM THE AUTHOR ALERT!!! So, I just want to thank everyone for clicking this novel. I really, really hope you guys will like this. If you do, please leave a comment, a review, and love. This is my entry for the Romance Carnival so please don't be a silent reader >_<. If there's anything you want to tell me you can reach me at my discord @nKaneis#3874 or dm me at insta @iamkaneis. Picture below is suppossed to be this novel's book cover. The characters are created using an avatar app and then I edited them myself. But my sister, who is actually an aspiring mangaka told me she needed to practice her drawing and conned me into paying her for my book cover. Anyway, love lots guys!