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Inspired after watching the fantastic new Avatar film (James Cameron), it tells the story of Harry More a rich OC who is able to use the Avatar programme to make a permanent change to escape his dying body. Now on Pandora, just before Jake Sully, follow his story as he meets the characters from both films and beyond as he explores the world of Pandora. Will he get his peaceful retirement? I think not!
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I genuinely tried so hard to continue reading this, but it’s just gotten to be too much. The MC is literally USELESS. He can’t do a single thing that the Navi can do without being spoonfed every single little thing. I mean, he’s at least 3x slower than Jake, even though he’s supposed to be some sort of genius. And the romance is competely forced. As soon as he saves her, she’s instantly extremely attached to him. That might work in an anime fic or something, but this is a semi-realistic movie we’re talking about. But I could care less about the extremely forced romance. It’s just absolutely infuriating to see the MC who’s supposed to be a genius failing at literally everything.
I rarely give a five star review, but this story definitely deserves it, his character growth is acceptable and not at all rushed, the story is entertaining and very well written, to the point where you get lost in the reading (which happened to me, since I read all the chapters in an hour) and that only happens when you enjoy something so much that you find it splendid to keep consuming it, there is no doubt that the author has done an outstanding job and deserves all the above recognition.
an Avatar fanfic was something I didn't know i wanted until this week. this is the second one I read this week that I love. everything about this story is unique and entertaining. Im loving the update speed too. Topnotch writing quality, keep it up.
As of chapter 31, started off great, good grammar, story seemed like it was priming the MC to either develop a semi-futuristic version of a Navi settlement using his technology and genius scientific intellect, essentially being a kingdom building fic, or at least having something more science related. The story could have even gone with a mutation/evolution storyline considering how much it mentioned developing new medicines and the effects of miracle fruit on the body, and it would have become a passible fanfiction. Instead we get a useless MC that virtually abandons the technology and science angle, something that he was an expert in, imprints and becomes overprotective of anything and anyone that looks at him (almost as disturbingly fast as a Twilight Jacob/Renesmee fanfiction), becomes religious faster then a cult member (which is even more odd since he was a tech/science geek), has a forced romance development that can only possibly happen if the two were the only ones left on the planet, becomes whiny and weaker then even Navi teens, and only mentions science sparingly while focusing on learning hand-to-hand combat and hunting.....this is one of the greatest wastes of potential I have seen in a while.
It's off to an interesting start, but all this billionaire scientist mc background with a lot of influence to allow him to go to another planet in a new body and then become some kind of space hippie seems so rushed, it's like the new mc's body will change his personality.
I absolutely love the idea of this fanfiction. I really hope the author will follow through to the end of the fanfiction
I am a person who give honest review, and most of them are harsh but....This fanfic is actually amazing. At first I was skeptical since this is the first Avatar fanfic I've read, and I have high expectations when it comes to reading, but this surpasses my expectations. The mc is not op and is learning in a realistic phase. The romance is a bit rushed but till acceptable. The mc is embracing the Navi ways but is still keeping his human side. and most importantly, it's not harem (stupid harem, breaking good fanfics) overall, I highly recommend this to readers who likes avatar
Fanfics on this are pretty novel at the moment, so the story gets some easy points on originality. In addition, the story is pretty decent content wise by itself. The only issue for me was when the love interest pops in around chapter 13/14. The story took a noticeable dive at that point, and the progression felt really forced.
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I'm only on chapter 7 and am really enjoying this so far. I love the genuine wonder the Mc has for Pandora. This fic is definitely scratching that Avatar itch I have. Especially after seeing Avatar Way of Water. Keep up the great work author.
I have read up till chapter 11, It is great till now, hoping that it stay as good as it is now.
I hope you can come back and right more this is one of the only Avatar ff that's are actually worth reading and has more than 30 chapters. I can't wait for more.
The Mc is to much of a sissy and weak, he gets overprotective of everything and some things are just to forced.
An interesting take on one of my favorite movies, a really great read and very binge worthy (finished 35 chapters in one sitting, gosh my eyes hurt)
I never give 5 star reviews. However this story is recommended by 10 out 10 doctors. It is incredibly well written. The plot is fantastic. The MC is great and not a cuck or a idiot. I whole heartedly recommend this story, as well as supporting with all of your power stones. Author please keep this story going. It deserves to be finished.
I very much like how this story is going. I liked how you developed the mc.and how you are blending it with the original story .It shows many avatars tradition. it is not rushed . overall very good fiction and highly recommend I will give this a Gold star
Fuiyoooooh this is a very good story my brothers and sisters. It is like MSG, but on crack