Synopsis
This is a tale of a man known as the Traveller. In the pursuit of his own meaning and his thirsty will to craft his worth, he found himself facing the darkness of the world. In a deadly fight for survival, he shall tell his story. And as if each road should have, this is a tale of sorrow, a tale of wandering, a tale of one soul's search for the escape of his own fate, and how that search, and the fearless will that drove it, gave birth to a legend.
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Dialogues: Maybe one of the most challenging aspects of my writing would be dialogue. Since I'm from Brazil, we have tons and tons of ways of speaking the same thing, using different styles and words. For the effect of compassion, you can picture listening to traditional rap. Example in dialogue: "Listen to me", in Brazil is way too formal, here the equivalent in day-to-day dialogue would be: "Listen me" or "Hear me out". Of course, I'll do it only for dialogues, because I know that this can be considered a flaw in grammar and structure.
What should I expect from the story? It's a slow-to-medium burn, the character-focused story mixed with worldbuilding. Some details are revealed from the dialogues, whereas others are from the background composition. Take this like an orchestra, the main instruments are the characters, but in the background, burning slowly are the worldbuilding, the power, the society, and so on.
What's unique about it? The power construction and cultivation, it's based on the psychological point of view, such as personality, traits, and flaws. There is duality so nothing is static and recorded in stone. Someone weaker could defeat someone stronger if he uses the flaws and traits of his opponent, and of course if he plays more smartly.
What are your inspirations? Games, animes, books, and movies. I can name some: Fullmetal Alchemist; Hunter x Hunter; One Piece; The Name of the Wind; Lord of the Rings; Mistborn; Final Fantasy; Rogue Galaxy.
What I should know before reading? English isn't my mother language, in fact, while I write the story, I'm learning the language more profoundly. The chapters are either edited until the second draft or released after I just finish, which takes a long time of my day to do, because of the struggle to write in a way that does not sound so "rusty" and "awkward".
What are the tones of the story? It has its dark side, the struggle of society, madness, and so on; however, I enjoy a lot of the feeling of "adventure" and "it must be funny", so you should expect some fun parts.
Chapter length? About 2000 words in average
The frequency? Slow because of my workload as freelancer and businessperson, lots of calls and projects to work on as a software engineers, then it takes a lot of my time.
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WRITING QUALITY: 5/5 The grammar is really good. The way that this was written was so easy to understand. No unnecessary expositions. Straight to the point just like how I like it. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 4/5 It's still too early to judge but I am giving 4/5 because I checked the table of contents and found that the first chap was uploaded a month ago while there are only 13 chaps. I'm not complaining because at the end of the day, I'd still prefer to read the book that updates only once a week but well-written than the other way around. (But I still prefer a well-written daily update.) STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5/5 No need to say anything. Read the first chapter and you'll know. CHARACTER DESIGN: 5/5 They have their own accent, baby! Need I say more? The interactions between characters are believable. Not cardboard cut outs. WORLD BACKGROUND: 5/5 I can visualize the place as I read. And there are no unnecessary expositions. PS. It was good but I just wished the paragraphs were a tad shorter though you can ignore this one. I just prefer shorter paragraphs. That's why.
This is a interesting story with a cool color. I liked the interactions of the characters. I would recommend this story. Keep up the good work.
This book is amazing! It got a likeable mc, the plot is interesting,good pace, good writing quality and great fight scenes. One small suggestion is to improve sentence structure in the early chapter
I have ridden till ch 10 and from what I have ridden I can say that this story is pretty interesting and good. I liked the way how you describes the world and the characters. I also liked the MC as he is kinda op and cool and not dumb as in other novels. But I would like to say that you should work on world-building. Overall this novel is pretty good and intresting.
When I was reading this story I felt like I was reading a fairy tale (an enticing one I must say). The fighting scenes are very well written and the characters are likable. As a fellow author, I applaud you for that. You did a great job!
This is one of the best novels I've read. The beginning was beautiful, and it felt like I was reading poetry. I love the accents of the characters. The descriptions are well-made and offer insight to the events as if I were a spectator. Amazing!
The story has been good so far. The world building is great! I love how Javer character has a different kind of speaking (?) because he was from different region! it's a nice touch!
I love the start to this. The detail almost flows around you as it drags you under and into this world the author has created, like the rapids of a river. One thing I would say however is that it is slightly hard t understand sometimes when it comes to the dialogue.
Absolutely amazing! The writing standard is phenomenal and the vibrant descriptions truly breathe life into this book. A masterpiece, so far.
Amazing and promising stry, good character development, Gonna bookmark this novel!..................................................................................................................
Bro, I would love to appreciate your grammar first. I am honestly impressed. Drop a few tips:) Secondly, this book honestly has potential. I have add this in my collection. Best of luck to the author:)
Here are my thoughts about the story. The pacing is quite slow but it is not a bad thing for this story. This will allow us to understand more of the world since the world is new to us readers. I also like the description and the length of the chapters. Not too short or too long and enough for us to understand the story better. That's all for now, I will probably make an update with a new review for this story.
The grammar was good, and the usage of words was awesome. I like how you describe the characters in a way that the readers could easily imagine. Keep it up!
I love how this book simply flows. The grammar is good, the character is easy to understand. The male MC does what the author created him to do, which is to make the readers excited. It's an interesting read. I am clapping my hands for you.
The grammer and writing style is lovely. This novel is so expressive that the reader begins to actually imagine the ongoing scenes. I love the Grammer, development is a bit slow but writing makes up for it.
Enjoyable read, beautiful written, good grammar, good chapter length. The plot is enjoyable and paced in a good way. Looking forward to what Asdras would be up to and how he manages his new found powers.
Very interesting, the story catches you in a second, its writing is good too, very fluid and simple. Keep it up, I look forward to more chapters.
An interesting premise and a responsive author who is constantly going back and revising chapters. The quality is literally improving over time. What more can you ask?
Hey there, author here xD If you have any questions about the novel, you can leave reply here! 1. First, I must say that this is my first attempt to write and create a novel, my only experience in this regard is that I have read tons of novel. So please, if you have tips, send me. 2. The english language isn't my mother language, so if there are gramatical error or strange sentences, please let me know. 3. How often are you updating? Well, currently I work as a freelancer software engineer — I need to make a living xD, so I'll try to maintain at least 1 chapter per day. 4. What to expect? Comedy, dark scenes, heated enemies, ruined society, interesting worldbuilding and a unique cultivation system.