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Drifting across the infinite well of chaos, a being made of light and of death scoured the abyss using its omniscient knowledge before finally settling on a tiny little egotistical soul whose death embarrassed even him, a nigh invincible being of primordial existence. Granting the soul powers beyond its human-like comprehension, the being of ash and blood set it adrift towards its other little creation. A slice of... heaven. Of excitement. Chuck chuckled before chucking himself back to the main universe, chortling giddily for he had set loose an abomination on the Winchester's on this universe, nor any other universe, had never seen before.
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Write a reviewthe story is decent but you really don't know what kind of MC you are dealing with. hes made good choices, stupid ones, and questionable ones. he seems to be a bit of a slave to the system as well sometimes and it reflects in the choices he makes. I feel like he's headed toward the cliche morally ambiguous MC that's been extra popular on this app. problem is a story without a framework and without boundaries usually starts losing its steam after losing its mystery. Story is predictably unpredictable, usually by adding a twist at the end up chapters by leaving readers out of the MCs thought process when he makes certain choices earlier in the story. seems like a cheap writing trick but just writing is impressive in its own right. Story is still pretty new so my review might change later. Story is overall pretty good and id suggest giving it a read before judging it.
Rapid change of pov, an mc that changes personality every five seconds and cringe dialogue make this almost unreadable.
personaly not a fan of changing the pow every couple lines, it makes the story feel super slow , other than that abit unneeded details like pow from the maid and his sister this just made me skip alot of dialogs. not realy a fan of this writeting where 70% of the chapters dialog is from a side character ,only readed 10chap hope it changes somwhat. otherwise very desent
It's great to see another supernatural writer,I have my own supernatural FanFiction but it's a bit low,I started following yours recently and I hope I can get some inspiration from it,thank you very much......❤️❤️
A great book with a consistent story and long chapters. Some grammatic errors but it doesn't take away from the story
Author Millan_Grimm
Welcome back Bro. I was waiting for an update. Hope you can finish this book [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]