/ Fantasy / Extraordinary Teens
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There I stood staring at this horrific being, standing on it's hind leg growling at me
With it green eyes and it's chest heaving like it's almost about to pounce on me,
Suddenly I saw it move but I felt numb all over like I was saying at my end, the next I knew it started running towards me ,
I felt all the joints in my body become stiff and numb my cheat was thumping like my heart was going to beat out of my chest
'bang' was the sound I heard next like something was hit by a force
'you okay' a voice said
I opened my eyes and gazed at the where the voice but all I could see was light a figure standing there staring at something but it wasn't me
Then towards we're the figure staring and saw the being which looked like a wolf I couldn't see then cause there wasn't enough light.
There it laid out like it was but I could it's chest heave up and down , it had a height of about 7 feet and I could see it's deadly scratch the floor,
'step back' the voice shouted at me not to go near it
Before I could move I saw it pounce towards me then I immediately shut my eyes and hugged myself in defence and fear, I heard another gunshot this time it sounded near me like it was fired directly to the wolf
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The writing style is not bad, but there need to be changes with the capital wording apart from that the story seems good.
There are grammar mistakes that could affect the reader's opinion about the book. I strongly suggest the author to edit his chapters and use BIG letter when it's needed. Also, there are too many """"" everywhere, stop doing that! The chapters are also too short, trying to fill in more words and describe the surroundings. 5 stars for encouragement!
This story starts off very very differently than others of this Genre. Which, I like; don't get me wrong. Took a bit to understand what was going on since the first few chapters were dedicated to grouping all the main characters together and setting up the backstory scene. Then spoke as to why everything was happening. I love it. Most of these stories, are set when everyone is adults; not Teens in high school, so that's a great difference. Besides a few grammar mistakes that others have pointed out, I love your thought process and story plot. Keep it up