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[What was your sin?]
"I tried saving them."
[What would you gain from doing that?]
"I just wanted to remove this scar."
[But that scar was never gained from not saving them.]
"I know. I just wanted to see if it worked or not."
[And the result was?]
"The one I saved killed me."
The discussion between Desire and Delight took place as he sipped the tea.
[What will you do now?]
"The stage has been set, and the doors will be opening soon. I also need to do my part."
[And what was your part?]
"One Last Chance."
The room was in silence as Delight looked at Desire and asked, [A sinner or a saint?]
"Depends on the way of the viewer."
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super captivating i was hooked from the start of the chapter. its pretty well paced and i add it it to my collection. 5/5 for me it was a great read.
Your writing style is very good, I like it. I also like the storyline even though the first chapter creeped me out a bit when he wa opening the bodies. Nonetheless it's very interesting. Keep up the good work.
Well, the dialogues are actually unique.....I believe the writing style is pretty well done and I believe there is a catchy feel about this one that will keep you attached.....Nice work! Best Wishes!
It's a good pacing of the story, not too slow or too fast, but really just at a point where it's just easy to follow and to read. The writing style is a win on my book as well.
An interesting read, though the genre isn't my first pick. The author does a good job of bringing the characters to life and the writing quality is quite decent compared to what you would normally find here.
This book is a total hit. The storyline grabs your attention, and the characters feel like old friends. It's penned in a straightforward style, which means no fuss, just pure story. There are moments that linger in your mind after reading. If you're scouting for a memorable book, this is your pick. A definite 5-star in my list.
You've done an outstanding job, author! Your story is exceptional, with carefully crafted characters and a captivating world. Keep up the great work. I'm thoroughly enjoying your story and eagerly anticipating more!
Game of Eternals: Sinner presents a captivating fantasy world, weaving together elements of adventure, magic, and eternal conflicts. The novel opens with an intriguing introduction that hints at an epic journey ahead. The writing style is engaging, offering a balanced mix of descriptive prose, action sequences, and emotional depth. The dialogue is well-crafted, allowing readers to connect with the characters and become invested in their individual stories. However, it is worth noting that some readers might find the pacing to be occasionally slow during exposition-heavy segments. Nevertheless, this serves to lay a solid foundation for events to come. In conclusion, The novel holds great potential for fantasy enthusiasts. Its captivating world, intriguing characters, and enthralling storyline promise an exciting and enthralling reading experience.
Good one but need improvement. Specially, character development and plot. Improve grammar too cause good grammar is always the best. Keep up the good work.
Wow splendid intro! I must say I am impressed! I know that this work has potential and I must say good job author!Will look forward for more chapters so release more! [img=faceslap]