In Mist Shinobi, Start With A Frozen Fruit! ( finished)

LV 12

shinydecapod

Its the Typical Chinese MC and plot where the world revolves around them and just fall into place. If you have nothing else to read, its a good novel to waste time you might cringe and complain alot but its still readable. Translation is below average the names of the skills are machine translated but the names so far are correct. The sentence construction is bad. Most of the Naruto characters personalities have been twisted to fit the plot so it would the mc's little world. The romance aspect is the typical trash webnovel formula, there is ZERO romance just alot of blushing and BS etc. The fight's are ok tho, so there is that going for it. Alot of the major characters have been dumb down to fit the mc's level. Alot of negatives in this novel but still a good read if you have nothing else to read.

LV 13

_JMR_

I can't understand why people would give 5 stars ? I knew it would be bad, but this bad ? At this point u can just post the raws. Calling persons it and whole Paragraphs that are not understandable. No effort at all just copy and paste with the help of an online translator. Without any editing at all. And u still want to earn money with that ? This is just shameless.

LV 4

Jer_Miller

It's extremely good so far. the quality of the translation is extremely good compared with the ones I have tried to read. Please keep up the good work.

LV 1

Rimuru_Tempest_4636

Interesting, I hope this novel will continue and not stop halfway. If possible, please update more. A little advice, please focus on updates, don't mind the mocking comments. As this novel goes on, I'm sure it will reap a lot of positive comments

LV 4

Hammer_Black

I have not read it but it sounds interesting so I will keep it in my library. 4 stars for the translation and the time you put into it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

MORPHEUS_

My brain right now after reading this fanfiction🤡👍

LV 13

Nicx

it isn't readable. it is mtl translation. don't bother .

LV 4

Maury_Rodriguex

Okay I am going to be brutally honest here it’s not good but it isn’t that bad I believe if this story had better translation then this would be one of the best naruto fanfics I’ve read it’ll be a 5 star story. CHEF KISS if that would be possible.

LV 3

SOMBRIO

Muitos erros na história de fundo, Ditados chineses que podiam ser cortados e muita linguiça podia ser tirada. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 14

Daoist5RvI4q

This is so good I lost sleep to continue reading this

LV 5

LifelessMan

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LV 2

ElonMuskOficial

It's a typical story of an MC reincarnated in Vila da Mist, so far as I'm following it's not too bad, I can easily follow it, in terms of the translation it's not bad, there's nothing of vassalage to China, which is good, I recommend reading it if you like MC OP, with an original plot thrown in the trash.

LV 4

Aldorax

This is a good novel. The Grammer is also good especially knowing that this is a translation. Apart from a bit if errors here and there. It's very good. you might not even notice it tbh.For the story, it's also good. Kuzan makes good use of his knowledge to gain a lot advantages. He is also smart and can think ahead and has gotten a lot of benefits. I'm at the latest chapter which is today's own. And i can say this is one of the best Naruto fics ever.

LV 4

Daoist172415

Very good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

LV 1

Santy_Melay

I'm not going to talk about the novel because this is a translation but there are things to fix, first, there are verbs that are not conjugated, commas are missing, there are also nouns in Chinese, I know some are oc but you could take the liberty of changing them to nouns Japanese, on the contrary, there are completely translated things, like the 7 swords or the tsukuyomi, which is that of the "Distinguished Heavenly Gods", secondly, these are more personal but Mr. Translator, if it weren't too much trouble, I could change some dialogues so that They seem more Western and not Chinese, that is, not what you say but how you say it, that would be greatly appreciated.

LV 4

I_HATE_INCENT_01

it's quite readable and with good story line at least so far....Thanks for the update though

LV 2

RICARDO_PISCOYA

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LV 1

Jordi_Hardiansyah

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