Arslan in Game of Thrones

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amaturewriter

-MC has white hair in GOT....this is just stupid. he'd get killed or something -MC is more or less a god cause of his wishes. he has supertalent, complete immunity to almost everything and a lelouch eyes without limits. Too OP and boring [ unless changed ] -MC a kid is behaving more mature and ***** like in world where superstitions is the norm I dont want to say the idea is stupid cause its interesting but it has some stupid shit.

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SW3X

such desires completely destroy this world, I would not be surprised if the main character suffers from spermotakitosis and becomes a harem, and a little later he will start introducing steam engines, pistols, etc., but he forgot to write that he will start talking at 3 months, he will come out at birth and run train with a sword right away, and he will immediately be considered a bastard, because none of the 3 wives of Arryn had white hair, and there was no such hair color in the Arryn family either :) I used Google translate, wrote this after 2nd ch

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DarthVegito

Not a fan of summoning wishes but thats jot the problem.... problem is that the mc is acting like a normal person at the age of 2 which is idiotic and the fact the the mc can give immortality out is dumb so if yju like that stuff that this might be for you

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Mepha

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Daoist010381

That's better, don't make him a weak-willed boy, he's a high Lord, and if he executes his guards just because the Prince decided to CAPTURE the great Lord, and they stood up for him, it will be a weakness before the vassals, even the king should be respectful, not like the Prince, so make it tougher for him, this is not the 21st century, he must understand the situation

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Sculp

good luck with novel keep it up author-san........................................................................................................

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LightningCatThief

Wishfullfilment, and not even a God one. There is OP and there is God playing Godzilla in his Sandbox-Kingdom. This is the later. Even World background is more than stupid, which is actually quite hard to do for a fanfiction, because the whole world is already there, ready to be used. I mean what kind of logic is it to give every dead soul a universe in case the dead person is not as moronic as the MC of this story, a number of multiverses to ruin and destroy. Even if you are so far above all powerful that you don't need to care about trillions of supergods running amok and destroying you creations, why would you do it. There is no entertainment in repeating the same thing trillions of times. Year MC is literally a T-Rex in a chicken farm, but his choices are beyond moronic. Example: Choose limitless Magic, All-knowing and True Immortality, and you are better than MC while still having 4 wishes left. All knowing entity:"You thought things trough, I am impressed", my ass. A 5 year old could do better. Argggg, don't think about stupid, don't review stupid, just leave it.

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Great_Abby

Great story! please don't drop! cant believe i missed this story! you should probably add game of thrones, or ASOIAF tag on the story. Anyway, about suggestions. Maybe have him fostered in the north? have sansa and arya fall for him, then when the execution of Eddard and fiasco that follows happen, the Arslan save them and the develop stockholm-syndrome. Extreme? maybe. Good for the story? HELL YEAH! And regarding the immortal serum, you should limit it to only the personal guards, and its preferably if the are around 20-35 guards. all of the are without families would be better because it is all a bit excessive to have families of immortals! so yeah. Even better if only you give the entire aremy including the personal guards the regeneration serum only since it should make them heal faster and stronger than ever. The immortality serum could take the fun off the story and ruin it if you hand it to everyone from your army. Alas, it is your choice. And it would be good if you try to maybe discover magic powers and him wield lightning? (lightning and thunder fanboy, don't blame me!) A last advice if you would take it is, it is good to have the mc overpowered. Heck! I would like to see him going on a rampage slaying dragons and monsters left and right! but it would be really, realy, really bad if everyone under hime and their mothers become overpowered, or above hte average power of humanity since it would diminish the coolness of the mc. While at it, why not add monsters to the world by gradually making some kingdoms report of the apperance of monsters, and make the mc proffesional in slaying them, so whenever a monster is mentioned, people will always mention him. so yah, make himm a legendary overpowered motherf*cker! but not his subordinates! at most only his sworn shield and sword if he would have them. In the end, it is your story mate. choose

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Btchplease

I've read many fanfics since 2016, and i must tell you i've never seen a trash like that. Author what have you thinked yes the isekai story is a shit but make it OP like 'i living in a anime with my fucking smartphone' ? Fuck this shit i'm out.

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89thBAMM

A book for the brain dead buns,trash,waste of time, save your remaining brain cells, known to cause aggressive autism I have two pieces of advice for author never pick up the pen again if this is all you can think up

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Loliput

Lolllololololllololololllll why did you delete the chapter I want to se how bad they were lolololol😎[img=fp] T R S H

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shifuufufuuud

author what happened why did you delete this plsss comeback!!!I like this novel!!!!NO WE YOUR FANS LIKE IT SO PLSS COMEBACK!!!!!!!FUCK THOSE WHO SAID BAD ABOUT THIS FIC JUST PLSS CONTINUE THIS AND COMEBACK

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Great_Abby

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Waqas

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AllenCross

Eh, I thought that it was Arslan from the anime who got into Game of Thrones, and here it’s just a left-handed person from modern times ...

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starking

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Great_Abby

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Great_Abby

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