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Marcus Kauffman, an Asura Prince was sent to the mortal realm to escape the chaos in the heavenly realm. Follow him on his journey as he builds an army and makes his way back up.
A touch of adventure, a pinch of magic, a drop of romance, and a bucket of revenge. What more could you want?
This is my first novel so there might be mistakes here and there. The writing quality might not be that good at the beginning too but I'm trying my best to improve. Happy reading.
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So far it is an amazing read, with a few typos here and there. Author probably has no editor. I love how the author can write heartwarming scenes while also writing ruthless ones.
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This is an average book. The author is young and it shows in the language of the dialogue and scenery description. I was not able to get very far in the book. There is nothing about the characters that makes me want to care for them. The magic system could use some description. Initially it sounds like cultivation but uses a magic-like system later on for illusions, spells. It is a solid first attempt for the author, hopefully better later on.
Pretty goood juts some mistake ans stuff but love when are you makIng more chapters๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
One of the most underated novels on this app. Very interesting plot that get better over time. The writing quality isnt that bad and the world background is amazing and mysterious.
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I can see that people are already reviewing this novel. Here's are my thoughts. Let's start with the bad one first. AUTHOR SLOW DOWN. The story is great, but please, slow down. Idk why but I feel like the novel is speeding up to fast. Share about the world some more. You know what chill is?? Aside from that I have no problems with the novel. The story about Marcus is something I would like to see more of. I would like it if the author would solve some of the ongoing mysteries soon :/ Overall I'm a hooked fish and I can't wait for this gem to have more chapters!
Aite im done reading after 4 chap..your writing cringe me and character interactions are childish af..its like a kid who just learn how to use bad word
Lovin the story but the author could hvea used better words. First few chapters werent that good but it got pretty better overtime. Anyway it's worth the read/
Ehhhhhhh...............................,,,,,,,,...........................................................................,,,...........,,.., not sO good
I'm too early. Saw this book last week, or was that last last week on potential originals. Tried it out and loved it. Would love to see how Marcus would travel back to the heavenly realm, get his wives back, and of course, get new ones.
(Writing this review when chapter 32 came out) I love how the author weaves both action and heartwarming scenes. Though he still needs to work on how he narrates the fights, but aside from that it's great. The way he writes about mysteries is quite decent. He'll slowly throw in a few juicy flashbacks that make you understand his past life and his life in the heavenly realm
Its scary loving an underrated book. You donโt know when an author will stop writing or lose the motivation to continue his author path. This is one of the great books out there. Hope the chapters keep coming
A couple of typos here and there but it doesn't disrupt my reading so i didn't really mind it. Marcus was really fun and I love how the author is also developing the side chars and not making them look like side dumps. Would love to see an improvement of writing quality though. Not sure if it's just me bc I read harry potter and books like that so yah
I found that your world background was very well descriptive, and I like that it was. I also like how you were just overall descriptive in general. I also love the character development at the beginning with Marcus and the girl. I do love how you designed your writing techquines. I did have trouble with the dialogue though at the very beginning. I am not used to that type of setting. I would recommend checking that. I honestly thought this story was very captivating and very intriguing. Good job to the author!!! Good luck in the future, I've added this book to my library!! This is also the user from the forum, BellsandLexShow!!!
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Pretty smooth progress, I like it. I like that they are recovering their memories. But is it in hiatus or has it been abandoned? Chapters no longer come out, so what do I put, 1 star?
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A story that was a hidden gem for me! This is absolutely the best! I gotta say I am impressed! With heartwarming moments and captivating scenes, it is definitely a nice read!.....from review swap.