Unexpected genre. It is difficult to judge only in three chapters. But it seems the novel is very promising. English is better than mine. I liked the text block. Dialogues are built like in plays. Simple. If this is a detective story about cyber fraud, then the novel can be interesting.
I liked the title page.
While not having update dynamics, I can deliver 5 stars in absentia. I hope that your updates will not keep you waiting.
Thanks, it was fun to read.
A few questions - you intentionally made the first two chapters short, and a third. longer?
Why is there no description of the world? Why is there no description of the characters?
Do you plan to give them as an author later?
Thanks!
Unexpected genre. It is difficult to judge only in three chapters. But it seems the novel is very promising. English is better than mine. I liked the text block. Dialogues are built like in plays. Simple. If this is a detective story about cyber fraud, then the novel can be interesting. I liked the title page. While not having update dynamics, I can deliver 5 stars in absentia. I hope that your updates will not keep you waiting. Thanks, it was fun to read. A few questions - you intentionally made the first two chapters short, and a third. longer? Why is there no description of the world? Why is there no description of the characters? Do you plan to give them as an author later? Thanks!
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