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This story is about Hroda, a young hybrid demon who fights to become the most powerful being in existence.
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Just add more dialogue so we know each person´s character. It will add more background to the story and character. If add it this story will be amazing, keep it up :)
Really like how the story is going but I will reccomend not to rush too much. I feel like the arcs are too short and could be made better if you added more detail on how the events happened or the different attacks occuring. Some spells could be good when the mage summons the demon and a bit more dialogue. An example for a dialogue would be him talking in his brain to his demon discussing whether or not he should go to the academy. Another place could be a dialogue of shock when they understand they are fighting a person possesed by a demon. All in all, just make the scenes longer and with more dialogue because it will make it more lively and we get to know the personality of the characters.
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Guys I'm trying my best to do frequent uploads of this story so if you could comment on the chapters and give some reviews it would help motivate me a lot and make the story even better◉‿◉
I'm just going to try my best and follow what the audience gives me so I can achieve my goal and make this one of the best novels and possibly move on to making it a manga and further in the future to an anime