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It’s a good story but don’t you think the switch up was to fast and too sudden great story though but if you make it into a harem and don’t give the mc those crappy emotions and feelings other authors do it would be better and also don’t make the mc readily agree with anything he should be more shameless but it’s enjoyable to read though good job
Good overall story, has an extremely original and well thought out plot, very in depth view of the world, the character development is very good.
Till now its a good story, reading is smooth and you know enough about the carackter and world to follow the story, hope a few more informations to be revealed soon, but it shouldnt go too much in to detail
I thought that the first chapter was pretty good, however you need to work on your character design as there was none in the first few chapters. I also hope that you will develop your characters more later in the story.
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Alright, a more general summary is needed of what I am going for in this novel- What I am trying to go for lets say later in this book is a Antihero-Protagnist, now I will not spoil how I plan on doing this. I also plan on making this story much darker within the next couple of chapters Overall— So far I believe the character development, world building and unsatisfactory and plan to improve these chapters in the near future a complete rework. I also plan on doing many other things, such as explaining the world, not too in-depth though, and also explaining the concept of levels (these are not the same as the ones in mmorpg’s.) I plan on changing a lot of things in this novel, I also plan to make lots of twists. Stay tuned for a very twisted story (see what I did there haha)
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