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Shisui died saving his friends, his family, his village. He died a hero. But his story doesn't end there, no. He goes on to do more, but what he does, might not be viewed as good by some people. They may try and kill him, they may try and trick him, but he rises again, so that he can fight for his ideals. This is the story of his perseverance, his hard work, and his undying will. 'The Will of Fire!' or is it... the 'Will of his Ancestor!'
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[3 chapters a week, can't do more than that, Sorry.]
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Write a reviewLet's make this a five star...๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ It's good I like it. Though wish the author would spend less time with his girlfriend and more time writing new chapters.๐๐๐ ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ
endless chaos is a cuck and I **** his mom every day as he spams 1 stars other fanfics like a retard. REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
God:Hmmm I wonder how shisui is doing...Iโve forgotten to check on him in the recent years *Sees what he is doing Layla:โShisuiiiiโ~ you arenโt escaping now... Seekvaira:โYouโve finally fallen into my time manipulation magic, thereโs no avoiding us now... Shisui:HELP ME I KNOW YOUR THERE!!! God: ...winners in life should all die Shisui:NNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! -9months later, a healthy set of triplets and twins has been born.
I spam 5 stars. If you ignore me, i will spam 1 star. Just like your last chapter notice. I dare you to ignore me, and drop this fanfic. I will show yo... nah second though, my bed is to comfy to let me move.
I am doing this because author paid me 1000 dollars for five star review (jk) Lets start...... Shisui is one of the most unexplored characters in naruto and seeing him in a fic in dxd is surprising in a good way. I was (still am ) sick of reading fics where Naruto goes to other worlds and this is a fresh breath compared to those. Writing quality : Decent and things flow well. (nothing much to say but can get better in some areas) Stability: Good I guess...I read this in one sitting. Now I will just write everything together... So Shisui in dxd seems like a good idea but only if it is executed well which author has done. Now Shisui here is not a copy paste of himself from naruto but is one who experienced death and death changes people. So shisui here is a bit ooc but in a good way as he follows his ancestors path (madara ) rather than stupid will of fire. He is more cunning and all in all shisui but improved. World is in dxd which has huge potential and ngl when I saw the au tag I was a bit scared as au mostly miss and ruin everythhing but in this not too many changes are introduced and if they are they don't ruin the plot. Next up, mc's powers.....he gets gifts from god which irked me a bit but I got over it as the story is good. Overall a decent dxd fic worth reading.
๐นRoses are red, Violets are blue and those who rates 1 star will get cucked without any clue...............,.............................. .
Great story so far , and its shisui mf uchiha what more do you want ๐๐ฝ Ps. There is no ps just trying to get the hundred and forty characters
Hmmm I wanted to give you a 1 star but I kinda like your novel so I gave you 5 anyway good luck with writing and kill issei se ya! โ.
This is an amazing novel that i suggest you read... Ps: If you give me a dollar i will hug you๐ Pss: Always hated when you have to write a certain amount.
Three words. Shisui, good story. Unfortunately there's a 140 limit, so I'll go into depth. The updates are frequent, being multiple chapters per week and the grammar is (surprisingly compared to other top voted fanfics) actually readable. The characters feel real, and it avoids most cliches that makes a story bad. You should read if Shisui or DXD interest you. On a last note, the author isn't afraid of avoiding or destroying canon. Which is a bit plus. It doesn't need to be screwed up, but a lot of fanfic writers literally just create an OC and they follow the main cast.
This is probability one of the best fanfics i have ever read, nice character Developmened, nice Powers... Definitely 5 Stars in my opinion, pls keep going๐๐
This fanfic deserves to be in top 10. It's really sad to see such a good fanfic is ranked behind some barely readable trash fanfics.๐ฉ Where did all the shisui fans go anyway? Maybe, they are in seclusion, that's why the ranking of this fanfic is quite low.
I like this novel so far. It has a lot of potential. I like the mc gaining power quickly but not to the point that he can one shot the powerful beings. I also like the fact the the mc is greedy to gain more power rapidly
I really like basically everything in this novel, the characters are great and Shisui's motives and behavior is what I would expect from him if he were to be in a situation like this one
Theo you dummy why did you not tell me that you also have dxd in it ๐ก๐ก๐๐๐โ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โ๏ธ๐โ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธ๐กโ๏ธ๐ก๐๐๐กโ๏ธ๐กโ๏ธ๐๐๐
Well written so far. Not a new concept though. Sharingan + hirashin + mokutan seen those more than few times. Great AU setting, makes it well connected to story of both original and of fan-fic. Just a request don't make it like other dxd fan-fics where mc gets almost all key girls of all factions.
Well story is good and this is one of the stories that i enjoy to read...... And author haters won't stop giving you 1 star and sh***y comments but well from all the other comments anyone can sum up a simple thing and that is this fanfic is enjoyable. So, you shouldn't give a damn about those who don't know how to even write stories but only mess with other s (not talking about genuine comments from readers who literally saying what they have in mind. What i mean is what's the meaning of E E E E E E E E E E E E E E E after giving one star well if its otherworld language then sorry but i am from earth and i never travelled out in universe to learn this language). ๐๐๐๐๐
Good novel author ,.......................... ...................................................................... 100/100................................very awesome
I like the your story very much . Character you build up is good. Specifically story about war and his grandfather friendship. I was looking forward about it. Please if can increase the chapter updates.
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Another great DXD FF...probably one of the handful thats decent, English, grammar and structure is dope MC is shisui as an SI in DXD in OG pillar. And theres no rush, author spends time showing development, like 15 chps and we are still in childhood, yah..author wants to show development, nice..do continue. better than other **** where MC is fking in 3 paragraphs. I will say that MC seems a tiny bit OC, but I suppose this is to be expected cause MC did die and reincarnate and as a result is kinda a new entity, so its fine. The OC characters past is something that would interesting to know. As for MC power, I dont really know, its OP in paper,,,but it has no pazzaz [ meaning its related to teleportation, its OP yes but no pazzaz like giant energy mechs and puppets and ****- then again author might change],,,but from the way I see it I think u need brains to so its really interesting, plus its perfect for shisui. Suggestion: OP MC, atleast well beyond everyone in his generation, I mean dude is a reincarnate. Make him smart, ruthless, and calculative and secretive [hide power---really do this cause he ninja, now yes, him being a devil and as result his sin might prevent but fk it,,,he a ninja first,,,so yah]...also plan, he was a commander. Any relationships build and take it slow. Also travel world, like go to china, Ireland , Africa [some country],,, Powers: Illusions related , Fire related , Time related, Erasure related **: And yes, i know, I didnt give 5 star despite this deserving it more than anything, and well its cause I despise when MC goes after moms or wives,,so yah,,,but bk was too good to pass..so yah. I;d give 4.9 but I dont know how