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Divine Seal Monarch [Dropped]
4.43 (23 ratings)
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Since the dawn of time, countless of people rose and fell. Most of those people live a mortal lives living frugally and peacefully.
Some of those people can summon wind, vanquish the clouds and can wield nature and even time.
They made countless of things out of nothing but the power they wield is not something a mere mortal can even begin to imagine.
The Divine Seal is one of those.
An items that can banish or seal anything that it doesn't like. If it seals something then it means that it has a use for it, if it banishes something, then it will send to the void, impossible to seen again.
Such a powerful item can cause seas of blood and mountains of corpses.
What if this item was found by a 'Cursed Child'?
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Honestly this is pretty good. [So far] I think it’s better then ‘Consuming Earth,Devouring Skies’ in terms of plot since it’s more organized. It’s obvious the one who gave the MC the cruelest curse is Fey whose the most suspicious. I really hope whoever it is and when MC learns about this curse, he will handle it in a calm matter. If not I’d be disappointed. He’s had many years of tempering and no longer a child after all. Though I love how he gets emberassed and carefree and stuff. Shows he’s human. I think what kinda ruin this story is Author adding the RPG elements. Guilds,Elves,Mages,Ect. You’ll eventually find yourself in a spiderweb. It was already a outstanding Xianxia by itself. I’ve enjoyed every minute of reading this. If you’ve changed the names to more Xianxia like, it’d probably be even a more believable Xianxia. Speaking of which. I really love Xu Qing. She made the best impression out of all the newly introduced characters. She may look cold as ice but is a unique character. You really rushed it in her arc, there. I was expecting her to fight MC in tournament but then was quickly erased. Then suddenly a lot of time has passed and Mc already nearly completed with his mission. I was hoping for these newly inner disciples to face some hardship together but already near the end of this mission. Anyways, I have high expectations for this for now. Maybe it’s not to late to fix some mistakes. At first I was doubtful due to the Cover but now I realize how fitting it is because that’s how I imagined the Mc
Interesting story regarding the usual cultivation theme. The plot and usage of words are easy to understand. One of well written original novels out there.
I liked the starting chapters very much. The story has a lot of development potential. So keep it up Author! Random words Jjeneidiennejdneheksnekwinwbsjsmejdnsnwkanebsksoennekwjejw wkwnneneisnen siejnwlwownebne nejeowowokne akeebbskeknw
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I would like to know why you dropped the novel! I like it a lot, I think that it is a very good novel I think that you should at least finish it! I like everything about this novel I dislike it when novels that I like get dropped!
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Wow nice story, would like to know what would happen to Sieg. It's incredibly fascinating nd well written. I enjoyed every single chapter I read.
This story has it all and it's going in the right direction. The plot is interesting, creative, and inspiring. But I also the story is developing a little snow
A Hidden Gem! Thumbs up for the author! A well written novel that can match up with the Chinese Novels. Your stones will never be wasted. Hoping for more updates 😊😁
Interesting plot till now. Waiting to see how character build up pans out. I hope it does not give the route of other novels that become repetitive.
So far it seems that this story is decent. The characters are believable, the world is interesting, it’s even frequently updating. Even with all that though this novel is nearly illegible, lacking proper grammar or spelling. Sometimes sentences are just left half completed or all the words are garbled and in the wrong places. I can’t get absorbed in the novel because to even understand what the author is trying to say I have to translate it into something that makes sense. It’s a shame really, this book seems to have promise.
This is such a good book with the best fucking development i have ever seen how the f do u skip da fukin 140 word requirement for goddamn posting?
You need to watch your tenses or get an editor. Ps their not thier. Other than that pretty good work as of chap 34. Is much more easier a homage to past translations? Much easier would be correct and just sounds more natural, unless it is homage then feel free to ignore this. I am only writing more to meet the minimum characters.
I gave a solid 3 across the board through really I’m only interested in the fact that there a writing errors which lead to a loss of rhythm for me, and lack of interest. I have no clue about the rest of the story. Sounds interesting so far, but couldn’t make it past maybe the halfway point of the first chapter. However what I read was enough to make me check back periodically for updated chapters and an editor or for the author to go back.
Good story so far. Hope fully his friends survives/resurrects later in the story. Typical cultivation and story setting (not that I'm complaining) Why the parental caution? Please do a mass release
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Hey man, I like your ideas but not the writing: First: Info dump is a necessary evil, but it's up to the author to make it as painless as possible. In your novel, though, there are unecessary long expositions in the wrong places which drags the pacing and make reading it a little exausting. Ex: long rant about the country and mercenary guilds on chap 11 when no one was going into a guild or dealing with nobles. In was between the end of the training and the conflict with the sect disciples. Ex2: Explanations of several techniques/weapons he wasn't really going to use. Only a quote and ****** explanation would suffice. Try to give only the necessary information for the moment the story is in and also to give room between the expositions with some plot points. There are several techniques and articles on smooth info dump. Look it up. Second: Progression Pacing. Your character is evolving too fast and learning too many things at once. He went from noob to owning sect disciples in less than 10 chaps. Instead of learning one rank of a skill at a time and using it during the story in interesting ways, we have a long training regime exposure and because there are to several ranks of each skill, the reader ends forgeting or not caring about them because it's too much information. Learning one skill and using during the story while evolving it would be far more compeling. Lastly, Characters: He's too lonely. Wilson is there but they barely talk about anything except for the training regime. He wanders and meets strong beasts but instead of learning about them to understand their importance you go on a long info dumb about completely unrelated stuff. The first girl that died was also wasted, it would be far better for her to be a cripple and then be rescued by the MC after coming back to town, or being like a long term mission. It would be good drama and drive for the MC and face slapping to his enemies, while adding another interesting character, but you just killed her off and he'll just never resolve this anguish because, well, she's dead. Hope these points help your future writing. This is not meant at all to discourage you. Cheers! Ps: Check your text editor for bugged auto correct since every single 'their' in your story is spelled 'thier'
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This book is one of my favorites! I love the plot. The MC is really likable. In the beginning of the story when it talked about his childhood, I swear it almost made me cry. I love this kid. Keep up the good work. This story is awesome.
Need more chapters! Good story with a nice background for character in the story. Keep up the good work. But need more chapters but don't overwork and spoil the story. Its going nice as of yet. Thanx for the story.
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I like this story looking forward for more updates in this future UPDATE MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING THIS THE MC GROWTH FEELS BIG YET RIGHT AT ALL TURNS EVERY PAGE IS A HEAVENLY TREAT FOR AN IMMORTAL THAT HAS LOST HIS TAST BUDS.. FOOLISH IMMORTALS, MORTAL, DEMONS, AND BEAST IF YOU DONT READ THIS NOVEL YOU WILL NEVER STEP ON THE TRUE PATH OF IMMORTALITY THE DAO IS THICK IN THIS ONE! READ AND BE ENLIGHTENED on what is a -NOVEL-! No but seriously please consider reading this if you don’t ure really missing out....