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Echoes of the Lost age

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Author: McCrunch

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Many gates are littered over the planet Gaia, These gates are connected to other worlds where long lost civilizations once flourished.

The Individuals of the many races that exist on Gaia enter these gates with the hopes of acquiring power, fame and riches. These people are called explorers.

Our main character Embarks on a journey to become on of those esteemed explorers, But in the process would discover the true nature and origins of what lay behind these gates.

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McCrunch

Thank you everyone for taking the time to read my book .Though I am still new to writing I will continue to improve on my work. So I hope you guys can stick around until then. Alot of plot twist and cool fights planned

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Firelorn_P_King

It's an interesting read for a fantasy novel. Granted, it starts up slow, but it later picks up the pace with it's enjoyable scenes and unique events. I can tell, the author put in the work.

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MasterPizza

First, congrats on writing this. I hope you enjoy the ride up to the end! About the story: I usually like multiple povs, since their possibilities are greater. The characters are interesting and the world background is put in view enough for the readers to get interested. Keep up the good work!

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Jolan_Hildebrandt

Okay so you have some show vs tell problems but that will be cured with time and experience. That being said. The battle is realistic I like the fact the commander knows how important the choke point and what his army is doing because he should know. Keep practicing and good things will happen

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Winnie_jazella1

Your start was quite captivating and wonderfully done. I support your writing as I believe it is one of kind given that your start is lovable.

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ZeroX0666

Great read! I really enjoy how this novel tells the story, and the author is good at doing so. The novel itself is also very interesting, with magic that makes me want to see more, characters that interact interestingly, and a plot that just makes me wanting more of it.

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Loctovia

Even though i am reading after the first few chapters, its a 5-star for me. It's just splendid. This is an easy-going fantasy story that really hooks one up.

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ThePotatoKing

Great story. Though chapters are a little long it only adds to the enjoyment, The writing quality is crystal clear and easy to follow. The story itself is pretty fun and engaging so far. Very good! Best of luck author!

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TonyT
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For it's Genre, this a good contender, the writing is good, the story progression is good. However, while bombastic and great, the action scenes can get confusing. Other than that, good story.

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RomanceFanatic028

So i only read few chapters but i really enjoyed reading it. The action sequence was very interesting, i felt like i was watching a movie. So that is all i have a say, if you are a new reader then give it a try.

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trumpet_creeper01

Fantastic novel. Although, I struggled a bit at the starting to get a grip on the characters and the direction of the novel, the interested sparked later on. The action sequence impressed me. Keep up the good work. Looking forward for future chapters.

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Pixiepiu

a great story with a good fighting sequence your story has a lot of potential to stand out. if I talk about the development I think this Novel needs more chapters to look more developed. otherwise, interesting read. Good luck.

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Soleil_Lynx

This piece of work is so good!! First of all, love the title. It immediately attracts attention. Just briefly reading the synopsis will pique your interest and after reader just the first chapter, this story won't disappoint you. Love how well the world background and characters is described. Hope to see more fron this author. Great job!

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AMonarch

Fantastic novel. I really enjoy the dialogue that takes place inn the novel which is one of the main reasons why I really enjoyed this novel. I hope the author continues to update.

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thefirespeaks

The plot is really interesting, although mundane. I have to say that the beginning really hooked me up. There was that element of suspense and mystery clung onto it. Honestly, when I first read the story description, I didn't like it. However, after visiting the chapters, it kept me on my toes. Its characters weren't that solid but they were all bearable. Also, the words used fit the story and flow very well. Smooth and well-laced. Looking forward to more of this!

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Lizabelle88

Wow! Stumble a gem! From demigods, large scale magic, aerial combat and winged creatures got me hooked. Writing quality is flawless, well detailed and well coordinated. Very entertaining to read with lots of actions and adventures, a dimension like no other. Characters are well developed. Story line is fantastic! A great read. Well done Author! Keep it up!

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Rayne_Rue

Loved how this book started, I really love the characters, The plot is amazing & I really love how this novel was described so all hands on deck great work author keep it up, however, they are a few punctuation errors they can be fixed and everyone makes this kind of mistakes like me . this doesn't stop me from recommending this novel , Follow my recommendation page to see this book @ Rayne_rue

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I enjoyed reading your writing, the beginning especially enchanted me. It was great, through and through except for some minor punctuation error, but who am I to say that. Lol, I make a lot more errors than that. The transition was perfectly done and it pricked my interest. [img=update]

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safa_bukhari

your book name is totally different from usual books, book cover is unique. your plot is well strong. all characters are good no doubt keep it up.

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