Era of Pirates

LV 6

Nobelsky

Now i know why this story is bland till this point... To put it bluntly... Its too simple... * Story lack development and the event happen without build up for example (-) MC just got bunch of memories of someone living in Earth... yet the only thing mention so far is that 'He have memories of One Piece World'. Its like that someone in memories have nothing else to do aside for watching and reading one piece.. (-) There are 'easy to get' training manual that left behind by MC parent... (-) There is convenient famous treasure Island that doesnt get protected by WG Then MC easily got Devil Fruit (-) Mc got Sidekicks without proper background and uniqueness (-) Strong guy appear for seemingly no reason (that shuzo guy) * To be honest... MC power is boring so far... Its just simple punches and kicks...without proper differentiation, yet he is so strong. It makes me as a reader doubt that he is strong...

LV 5

Suriel8224

Change the Mc please.. Make the girl the Mc 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 from what I see the guy doesn't have a talent at all. The girl is better than him . 😀😀😀😊😊😊😊.. 😇😇😇😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😅😆😆😅

LV 5

Roarrrrr

DON'T DROP IT!!! PLEASE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! PLEASE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! PLEASE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! PLEASE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! PLEASE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! PLEASE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! PLEASE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! PLEASE!!!

LV 4

Ibellux

The story is good I think. Everything make sense for me but it is too fast pace. I feel like I Read a summary of the story. I think you can expand the story of every chapter. Add more comedy, interaction every crew, you can bring other pirates thought, add romance, and think about effect to strawhat pirates

LV 6

Megajoke

Great story overall the female character luna is a little annoying in the beginning but she really comes into her own as the story progresses.

LV 5

Golias

Men.... what the **** are that? I fell my brain burn... hahaha I just can to say, wtf?! And.... WTF?!!! 👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀

LV 10

TurtleManiacc

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

LV 10

TurtleManiacc

donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !

LV 4

Aiman079

NUKE NII CHAAAAAAN... MY FKING TWIN FUCK THEIR ASSES UP YA GO FKING KID AND ALL THIS SHIT IM TYPING IS JUST CAUSE OF THE DAMN CHARAC REQUIREMENT Y'KNOW THE DAMN 140 CHARACS FML......

LV 4

MoonZkun

Is it dropper??????? Please continue diisssssss its already getting exciting but you just drop it how sadddd.. ..... ............ pleasee moooooooreeeeee more moee more more

LV 5

Majeh7

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LV 2

Robson_Danilo

Oque aconteceu o cara parou de postar mais, e parou logo na melhor parte pelomenos terminar o arco da guerra né *&%& seu zé &%@#!# fr#sc@ arr@mbad@

LV 5

Majeh7

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LV 4

Ky4ler

This is so stupid like really the mc doesn’t feel like one he is like weak as **** compared to Luna like is he even a mc anymore and they are sooooo young but is as strong or stronger than admiral I don’t think so no development just start off strong when I say that I mean Luna because she always has a hand up against mc all the time like da fuq

LV 5

mikedanger

Anyone who's anyone has read this. It is possible, the best novel I have ever picked up. It is the only novel that has kept me interested even after almost 34 chapters. I just hope the author can continue his pace because this story is going places in the future. I like the progressing of the main character trying to find ways to increase his strength I don't see that in a lot of the fanfics I read a great job wishing this novel the best for its future.

LV 4

Alfakir1M

الآن أعرف لماذا هذه القصة رديئة حتى هذه النقطة ... بعبارة صريحة ... إنها بسيطة جدًا ... * تفتقر القصة إلى التطوير ويحدث الحدث دون تراكم على سبيل المثال (-) MC حصلت للتو على مجموعة من ذكريات شخص يعيش في الأرض ... ولكن الشيء الوحيد الذي يذكر حتى الآن هو أن "لديه ذكريات من عالم واحد قطعة". إنه مثل أن شخص ما في ذكريات ليس لديه أي شيء آخر للقيام به جانبا لمشاهدة وقراءة قطعة واحدة ..

LV 6

Noobotaku

I really think this fanfic has potential. It is good read, well it can be bland some time. As for the criticism I would say author has left out few details or forget to address the detail after mentioning it which make the story bland, Like Lyn wanted a weapon but we don't even know what weapon he bought or what weapon he is uses in general. This details may seem irrelevant to some people but this details are what make a story have good foundation and make it enjoyable. Well that's it for now, keep up the good work.peace😁

LV 5

Chezianda4ever

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LV 3

Gooooooooooooooooodddddddd fan fic Great storyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Fantastis abillllllllllliiiiitttttyyyyyy of char Keeeeppppppppp updateeedddddd Dont dropppppppppp

LV 6

lenan

Dude i like your story hehehe i want more hhehe by the way thanks for the chapter XpXPPXPXPXPXPPXPXPPXPZPXPPXPXPPXPXPPX XpXPPXPXPXPXPPXPXPPXPZPXPPXPXPPXPXPPX XpXPPXPXPXPXPPXPXPPXPZPXPPXPXPPXPXPPX XpXPPXPXPXPXPPXPXPPXPZPXPPXPXPPXPXPPX XpXPPXPXPXPXPPXPXPPXPZPXPPXPXPPXPXPPX