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Thank you, I avoided a stray bullet, I hate these stories that make the simple complicated.

honestly, I don't even remember the content of it, but there is a lot of dialogue in HP, I don't know what you're talking about, dialogue with the Dursleys, dialogue with Hagrid, dialogue in Diagon Alley, dialogue on the train, dialogue in the selection and etc... from what I remember reading here, most of the dialogue was deleted in favor of a narrative summary, not that it matters to me anymore now, after all I don't remember that story.

wow, very Hate, I actually saw that a lot of it talks about the word count, in my opinion it doesn't really matter if there is or not, basically you received a story for free, be grateful for what you received instead of complaining about trivia outside the plot . As for the lack of change in the story, in fact the original path has basically been traced, at least until he reaches the valley of peace, changes before that are unnecessary, after all he is Tai Lung with more memories and future knowledge, but still Tai Lung, his personality and actions are still based on the original, as is his arrogance. In general, I really like the progression of the story so far and I hope it continues.

this is a translation, the original is called: 选择精灵母亲，但是哥布林巢穴. the author is: 斑斓色苍空 In english: Choose Elf Mother, but Goblin Lair At a minimum, the translator must inform that they are a translator and where the original is.

From beginning to end I was waiting for him to revive, leave Hogwarts and develop his personal power and/or build a force or something, but after forcing myself to read the entire boring school life before he was resurrected, finally when will he escape I was left with extremely happy that the torture was over, only for a wild Dumbledore to appear and get him to be sent to Azkaban... I gave up, I don't want to be frustrated again.

to put it in a nutshell...it feels forced. The characters literally look like NPCs with ready-made dialogues, the communicative reactions also have many inconsistencies, I mean, understand that it's a medieval world, but people don't just nod their heads to everything they say to them.

As an absolute worshiper of horror, even without reading it, this story already captivated me just because of the image of the nun and its interesting synopsis. I sincerely expect a lot of chills down my spine for my future self, I confess that the mix with John Wick left me a little less interested, after all I want a horror and suspense story much more than an action and adventure one, even so, I'm still full of expectations . In the future I will come back to write a better review, but for now I will wait to release more chapters before reading.

He left out a lot of kingdom building stuff, just saying "The city was built, the police were formed, the army was well dressed...", but even so, just the idea and the execution process excited me, the concept Isekai is old, Fairy Tales fanfics are rare, but being reborn as Farquaad... that's original and I'd be very happy if the author continued it.

generic little genius mc, op mc, decides to do it and quickly succeeds, little demon girls fall in love at first sight, Serafall being a scumbag who farts rainbows as always, among others...

It was actually more of an exhibition critique, it seems negative because I myself didn't like those facts, but if it's your cup of tea, just drink it happily, brother.

Constant comments from the author during and after the chapter that completely break the immersion, breaking the fourth wall, ultra short chapters + comments, so much so that you wonder if you are reading a story or a Twitter post from a Hardcore otaku. Another negative point is the unknown Pokemons, as the reader has no knowledge of them, it is easy to forget their characteristics, so the imagination of battles is harmed. Overall, it's too tiring, silly, and boring to continue.

So, it's boring. The development of the story practically follows the original, adding the protagonist's annoying brother, the writing is weak, making me feel that the character is lifeless and just a Mob that must have appeared in the original just to die somewhere and give a power up in the protagonist for losing his brother. Moreover the author leave the couples from the original with no changes, the story is basically about the protagonist's generic brother, I wanted to keep reading because to be honest it's not the worst romance I've ever read, but my eyes won't stop rolling, so I just gave up.