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You know the usual cliche right folks so let me say again this story is about a reincarntor journey through the world of Fairy Tail the badass wizards and waifu galore right?
Except for one problem with the MC realizing his born the same year as Mavis in the year of X673 all the way to the past does this disuade him?
No he will use anything to his advantage and possibly learn the lessons of life and magic in his new... Magical Life.
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While everyone is entitled to their own opinion, I personally have several issues with this story. First of all, I find it hard to believe that the main character is able to learn alchemy simply by watching Full Metal Alchemist. This seems unrealistic and takes away from the story's credibility. Additionally, there are numerous grammatical errors throughout the text which can be distracting and hinder the overall reading experience. Another problem I have is with the author's tendency to copy content from the wiki without making any changes, and in one chapter, even including an event that takes place 200 years in the future. Furthermore, the main character vows to protect his family, but we as readers have not been given any information about them to feel a connection to them. Moreover, the introduction of Truth from Full Metal Alchemist seems out of place and doesn't even feel like it belongs in a Fairy Tail fanfiction. Ultimately, the story has potential, but its execution leaves much to be desired.
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Just no, this story doesn't even feel like fairy tail fanfiction at all, author put a fairy tail and fma crossover tag. First the mc learns alchemy somehow in the world of fairy tail because he understands alchemy by watching an anime, like Bro just no. You are not that smart, second, the mc has no magic in a world where you need it if you gonna survive against the top tier. Third grammar and coping things from the wiki without changing a single word and making it so that characters say things don't even happen until 200 years into the future. Fourth in the newest dude introduces Truth from fma and this is where I just draw the line. If you wanna a good fairy tail ff, just read Fairy Tail: Shinigami and Fairy Tail: Annihilation King, they are plenty of good fics on fanfiction.net as well
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name child meivs and MC skyaliar short sky could makes sky into future be fairy tail like she was frozen in ice or time (mavis,natsu) i would be curious what you will do zerf become his friend or quality will destroy the curse or just find ways to kill him _______________________________________ good luck framing a good story for us reading 🖤🖤🖤
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Disappointing. Thats the only word I can use to describe this book. For goodness sake, this is a Fairy Tail FF. Not full metal alchemist, so why bring truth into context, if you had brought in death as a God then that's okay, after all, Zeref's curse has to have come from somewhere, but why truth? That's just one though. Why is the MC stupid? I thought he went to community college, so how can he want to be below Mavis? No, why did he even use Mavis DNA as a foundation for his magic when if he follows her, he could have met Zeref? Also, Change your synopsis and title if this is a Fairy Tail × Full metal alchemist mashup
Well I read till chapter 6 and I can say that this story is a potential 10/10 with the concept of alchemy of FMA but please No Harem. Questions apart have you abandoned completely your past works?
I caught up to Ch.8 and so far this one is looking good. It has great potential to be an outstanding novel. I can see the improvement from ch.1 to ch.8, his speech is becoming more refined compared to the abrasive one in ch.1, and then I can see that his relationship with Mavis is progressive so it doesnt feel forced. With some careful planning and continous development in their relationship, I can see you writing a a great novel compared to those trashy gotta catch them all harem novels.
I contradict all those who put a bad note to the author under full of pretexts when the story is really good by reading the first 3 chapters they criticized the story like never before. The only pretext is: the mc is in Fairy Tail why is he the alchemy of FMA? And why not? The author's only mistake is that he should have said that there would be alchemy. That's all I like the author story so keep going.
In a world of magic without having magic and choosing the option of being an alchemist Fairy Tail has a power system, namely Magic/Ethernano and any type of power will not be far from magic Even the devil created by Zeref uses magic to make it and curses are exclusive to devils and can be used by humans using certain magic Since this is Fairy Tail, Alchemy should definitely use ethernano to use And don't say you used external items to use ethernano because your mc can't use ethernano Now in Tenrou for sure the technology is not very advanced this option fails also why do you use fairy tail to make mc alchemist you should use Fullmetal Alchemist or something else And personally i hate your mc because well...
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I like it a lot. It could be because there are not many good Fairy Tail FF but still love the take you took on it and even the timeline you started in is unique. I don´t rly get why people are bashing the story because of the Alchemy take but it has a lot of potential an fells like it could belong to the world. I hope you don´t drop the story and keep it up with the updateds.
don't mind these people they want pokemon harem or evil anti-hero selfish mc. and how it had a problem with alechemy power they are petty and I think this novel is better than other fiary tail why because there is good written romance and interactions and building bonds between characters and not also that time skip and they love each other right away too focused mc why do you think that the characters also show that they live in this world and not appear every now and then the manga would not be popular
Its an average read. Neither good nor bad. Majority of the story is inner monologues. The MCs reasoning is as spotty as the English used. If the story was cleaned up a bit, it'd be better. Whether its the grammar, the character interactions, even the inner monologues. There is no world building besides some facts about Tenrou island.
I don’t know man I was enjoying it originally but I had to remove it as I felt like such a degenerate reading about two 16yr olds doing it. The romance seemed to be working okay while they were growing up but the lemon came across as complete fan service that the story definitely would’ve been fine without. In regard to the magic and setting it’s a relatively interesting and unique take but wow did I delete this quickly when I started reading ‘HARDER’ in my fairy tail fanfic.
23 chapter's in and I think this has great potential for a great fanfic. But i do think if you have the time you should come back to the first 6 chapters and edit them so they explain mc action better. p.s i don't like the fact that people are giving 2 star reviews because the mc uses alchemy or Truth had an appearance in the story. Because i think that these complaints aren't valid criticism there more of opinions then anything.
yeah i agree with a lot of the points of the other 2-3 star reviews so i am not gonna repeat it. some other negative points are the development and the character. dont know if author has planned more development but the "MC" is more of a wimpy and simping subordinate type whose existence revolves mostly about being a doormat and comedy relieve... the pplans or his "magic" and development are pretty dissapointing since he goes purely support role and chooses the worst power for fights ina way. he also doesnt use the full ppotential f modifications and other things. some because of no real reason and some because he developed kinda wonky morals and angstBS sadly.
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Okay, so I have many problems with this story. First of all you bring him into the world of fairy tail a world of magic and his first thoughts and only goal is to do alchemy? He wants to be like full metal alchemy If you wanted this then just do a full metal alchemy story.. Mc’s wants to not be friends with mavis but wants to be her subordinat? What. She is a child. The story makes no sense so far and just makes the mc seem stupid. The thing that has annoyed me the most is being deceived by the author. You hinted in the title it was magic and in the synopsis there is no mention at all about the mc not having magic so he will focus on the alchemy instead and overcome it. In fact if this was mentioned in the description I wouldn’t been so turned off by the story. Essentially, you are missinforming the readers to click the story and get more views. Where as if you put what the story was acc about you wouldn’t have got as many. This is what has annoyed me the most. That may not have been your intention but this is what it has felt like.