/ Fantasy / God's Authority
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In a world wherein everything is granted with authority, and through cultivation, one can advance into higher authorities. Rael found himself in a bitter struggle as a Soulless.
" You are destined for greater things " it said to him.
Rael will now set his own journey to seek for his greater purpose. Along with other companions, a destiny greater than before awaits. A destiny that will alter the history of a new era.
The Soulless that rivals the God's Authority!
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I'm quite new to Qidian and I'm looking for great books to read that are still under development. This book struck me a good deal. Please keep updating for I'm excited in how this world will turn out and its character development. Grammar and such could be improve, but I don't find it hard to read at some part. If compared to other books that are new, a few stand out in that and one of those is this one. If I may add, its quite descriptive and I enjoy that despite being gory and morbid at most part. Goodluck with your story.
Unlike most other world stories, you took the unique path of making Rael enter in a hellish world as the lowest “class.” Another point of difference are the seeds. So overall, this world stands out among stories of “systems” or typical magic. There’s a few minor typos that can easily fixed, like capitalization or a missing space. Altho, where did you pick up putting spaces between the quote ends and beginnings? It’s my first time seeing that. This was written well overall; however, I would’ve liked to know more about his first experiences in the new world. It was mentioned that it was a hell world, but I was confused whether he was transferred or restarted. I even reread the beginning after chapter 12. Does the small hands mean he’s a child now? Has he just started living or has he been there a while? He seems rather familiar with the world right away. Ahh maybe I’m getting this all wrong, but since a lot of the events so were occurring to 171, the girl, I didn’t figure this out. Otherwise keep it up! The action moves quickly, but it has good detail. I’d say this is your biggest strength.
Great story development, I'm here for the plot. Expecting good character development. Update more in the future so the story can progress in a stable pace. Love and peace!
Update faster in the future so the story could escalate in a proper pace. Good narration grammar so far. I love the two princess combo in the story. Hope to see more.
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This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter 15. We have a darker kind of reincarnation story here. Man dies on earth, meets godlike being and gets dumped into system fantasyland. End of standard story. Being reincarnated as the lowest of the low basically constitutes as going to hell. Apart from the male lead there are quite a few supporting characters, both allies as well as antagonists. As of chapter fifteen it's clear there's some kind of conflict between two factions. It should also be noted that the main character at this stage of the story mostly is reactive. He gets dragged into events rather that deciding his own future. At the very last chapter we're shown how he does take a stance, but I have no idea where it's going. Poor English, shaky handing of tense and the wavering between third person omniscient point of view and third person limited point of view all detract from the reding experience. Add that the story is rather confusing. Explaining the world in terms of system mechanics also means that the story grinds to a halt from time to time. Now for the stars. Writing: Three stars. The story needs line-editing. The English used is poor enough to force the reader to reread lines from time to time. Updates: Four stars. The fifteen chapters published this far come with several holes in the delivery. Story: Four stars. While confusing it's an interesting plot. Character: Four stars. Three characters are slowly gaining a personality. I can see this evolving into a fifth star within another dozen or so chapters. World: Three stars. While we're served system data on a dystopic setting said world really isn't experienced by the characters. More often than not we're merely told it's their personal hell. Lastly, given a language overhaul and quite a bit more showing rather than telling I have high hopes for where this story is going.
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Well this story just captivated the hearts if many readers making its own steady progress. As a fellow reader this novel can be label as job well done for a writer who just started writing his own novel.
Great work! The story is developing very nicely, but there are too few chapters out for me to properly get the direction of where it is going. Grammar is as written 'GOLD' and it really he** freshen up the characters and world building. Also, there are other aspects that are rather..'more detailed' than one would expect, but I for one, don't mind. Keep up the good work! This will definitely get big. 5/5 for me
Good start, very descriptive, chapter per chapter. Character development is great, looking forward to the 'weak to strong' plot. Chapter update isn't stable, work on that since the start off of the story is great! Update more!
Pretty good, pretty decent. Maybe add a warning, some people dislike gore and such. Keep writing, you did great. The fact that you used the System cliche in transmigration novels, but turned it upside down and created a whole new world of it is plausibly creative.
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Still can't see the full potential of the story, since its new; but its there. Update are not constant, but I'm intrigue how this story will go.