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Great Expert Ninja-Naruto Fanfic (My Version)
4.23 (58 ratings)
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A Child Blessed By Poseidon, fought to protect, to survive, and I got nothing more...This is my version
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So you are telling me he had op perks, special powers and blessings yet he didn't do anything with that? He always stayed passive until it was too late? Just... Good luck with your story, it's not for me.
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I liked the novel based on a UZUMAKI and it is completely different and awesome. Definitely a bang till now. The progress is good and i like it.
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Ok this is beyond retarded , how can he live in a ninja world and never get the hint to get stronger, mentally challenged mc and author...................................................................
Great read! (although it does take from other fanfics, it still has its own originality, and good development) 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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Loving the novel I enjoy that the author of Yuri is revamping his original story it is like a gem in the rough getting it's Polish on . Keep it up author
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Well it's a good fanfiction so if you can, go an read a bit ... .... Fckng 140 characters (°~°) ............................................
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The story is alright, not too good and not too bad The main character is extremely a dumbass He could have prevented the massacre of the Uzumaki if he didn't focus on being a beta too much and actually trained I'm only on chapter 3 and I hope it can get better Was extremely disappointed that he forgot about his system after he goes try hard being a beta
love the story its extremely good :).....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Awe man I wrote the review on the novel that you dropped but I’ll just sum up what I wrote so I wrote that the story is absolutely fantastic and I think you should keep up the good work but maybe you should try to find a better way to shorten the explanations of the MC abilities cause it can become pretty confusing and I only understood some of the abilities after he used them in combat but aside from that and a few grammar mistakes that story is almost a perfect ten out of ten
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Good story. Favorite part is the fight scenes. They are exciting. Character limited to single chakra nature but can use it to godly levels. Looking forward to how his skills develop.
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1rts chap was a good promise damn so good. But 2cond chap everything when to the ****. Come boy. You new that future, everyone gonna die. What you gonna do? Try to get strong? Said something? Nooooooo you fucking do nothing
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