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early days but keep up the good work look forward to more chapters ... .....................................................................
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the story is dope. power is especially dope. MC is strong and becoming OP fast. all dope. what sucks. the time MC is in [ very close to water 7 arc...basically he has 3 moths left before water 7 arc ] and the MC's intention of wanting to not change and wait for cannon events to occur and wanting to help SH. Seeing his mission, i;ll assume he'll temporarily become their nakama .... would've preferred way earlier or something different, rather than him helping or joining em. MC also seems to be more of a heroic of ' good ' character, that wants to save rather selfish, neutral, evil, etc. so theres that. hopefully MC isnt a fan boy who later joins SH. hopefully changes cannon or atleast does his own shit rather than joining em and slightly changing cannon, whilst mostly riding on their coattails cause that'd be shit. other than its all pretty much dope. the plot might seem boring but still too early to judge, hopefully it'll be different from the other ff's of a similar plot.
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꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!
It's Good. Definitely better than your previous one. Looking forward to reading more.........................................................
Need more chps bruh!!! ................................................................................................................................
Just keep him as a bounty hunter unless you don't know how to write a story because If he joins Luffy's crew he probably going be a beta mc plus good work on the card system but don't rush the skills he gets hope it's not a harem.
one of the best one piece fics ever in this site until now, keep up with the good work, waiting the next chapters...........................
I like the story so muchhhhhhh ÒwÓ 😍😜😝✨😘 Isjsjsusjsnjsidujskissjudjdnsudhsbjssnjsjsnsnsjshwujwysuskakduhsbwyajjsidjrnesuisndyeuwjekeijwjshsbsh (just filling in)
I am really enjoying it so far! I hope you continue the story soon and hopefully we'll get more chapters at a time. I recommend anyone questioning this book to read it.
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don't know why but I search for novels with cards but they're so few and some are discontinued. kagsjshshsjsjshshdhdjdjdjdjdhdhdjjdjfjfj
More chapter please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please !!!!!!!!!!
It's pretty good one of the good ones in this site but the update for the chapter is a long wait but overall it's good can't complain about anything else
I really enjoy this fanfic, I like it because MC doesn't change the main plot of the story but it still has an impact on the story. I hope the author does not change these characteristics and I hope that the author can provide surprise plots that can make readers more interested in reading this fanfic, hopefully the spirit will continue to this fanfic.
i like this novel..... hope it gets released regukarly..... i like this novel..... hope it gets released regukarly..... i like this novel..... hope it gets released regukarly..... i like this novel..... hope it gets released regukarly..... i like this novel..... hope it gets released regukarly.....
I like the synopsis so five stars......... ..................... ....... ...................... ..................... ......................
BEEN WAITING FOR THE CHPS FOR A LONG TIME!!! AND IT DIDN'T DISAPPOINT TOO!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHPS!!! PLIZ UPDATE MORE FREQUENTLY!!! ....................
I’m out as soon as i saw the cards in the title don’t really like them and they’re soo overused but i’ll give you 5 stars out of pity. i’m an nice guy, you’re welcome.