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I was immediately hooked on the first chapter. It reads with sharp contrasts and colorful details that grabbed my vision and guided it through the moving images. The chalk dust, the bird song, everything added to the experience of the story and left me wanting to find out more. Best of luck with this, Author, although I'm pretty sure you won't need it since this seems to be an amazing start to a good novel.
Underated Gem which just began. Another interesting story from Sloth, Plot sounds very interesting, so does the characters abilities, I can already tell we’re going in heavy with the action on this one. Give it a read, i know i will.
What a wonderful read! Guys this novel is not your typical trendy stories. This is far greater and vast than just that. The use of metaphors, the imagery, the suspense, the writing; Everything has got me hooked. However, you can feel the same only by reading it. So stop reading my review and open this book for all it's glories! You won't be disappointed! The soul the author has put in this book will definitely move your hearts. Keep the good work up, Author!
First chapter and I was hook! This is such an immersive story, and the author has done really well to create a surrounding that would attract the reader. Such novels are hard to come by. Can't wait to read more!
This novel is very well written and descriptive. Action is happening from chapter 2 onwards. Very attention grabbing. The author has multiple other works, one of which I am really enjoying, so I certainly have high hopes for this one!
A fascinating beginning, this story is filled with mystery that keeps you guessing. I would recommend this to anyone who loves slowly unearthing a mysterious novel.
The author did an amazing job with cover editing and writing style! Grammar is amazing and the descriptions are meticulously perfect! There are only few chaps but I can Already say I will love it! Good Job author!
Chapter 4 here. Too short to satisfy my reading craving. Again, always a great piece of work from sloth. There's a hint of mystery that you'll find it hard to resist here.
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into. Synopsis: ?/5. No synopsis at all, so can't comment on it. Grammar: 5/5. Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. The sentence however can be complicated for readers to comprehend so they might need to spend more time reading a chapter. Writing: 4/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more. Overall: 4.6/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right.
Nice book, nice first chapter execution. That's the main thing I can say on this book, the plot, execution, and a lot it things are dine right. I really have high hopes for this book, but in the end the author gets to decide how great it becomes. I'll be cheering you on from the background.
There is only few chapters but those few are better than the most trash on here surprisingly. One of the possible rising stars out there, the writing quality is top notch with no glaring mistake whatsoever, the conversation are immersive and no I don't want to spoil anything, so just read it, will ya? The minus I got here is that this book doesn't have much chapter yet, yeah, only that. Regardless, kudos to the author!
Hello everyone, Author-san here. First off, let's address the elephant in the room. Why did I rate my novel 1 star? The answer is simple. With the abundance of 5-star reviews that one can easily get on webnovel, I believe it grabs way more attention when one does the opposite. But why would I need your attention on the review instead of the novel itself? The answer is even simpler. It's because this novel is NOT for you if you are looking for: Get rich/powerful/handsome/quick/bulky/smart/whatever quick. While I have one project like that in-store, this novel is something I put my best effort to write, and it would feel blasphemous and degrading for me to put a stupid plot here. So be advised, if you are looking for an easy self-insert with lots of snusnu, face slapping, and other overused plots, you found the wrong novel to read. What does this novel entail then? This time, there is no simple answer. When creating a plot for it (the first one I actually properly outlined ever since my "Road to the Crown" historical novel) I never wanted my MC to have it easy. I never wanted the main character to overcome all the troubles with the power of friendship or his biggus chungus. I wanted this story to feel real, as much as real it can be within the frame of a fantasy. What I wanted to show in this story, is a tough, gritty reality of what I believe would happen if someone were to actually transmigrate. While there is a certain amount of plot shield steeming from the deeper backstory that I will reveal early on, it's not something that comes without a cost. Once you reach the fourth chapter of the story and see what happens to the main character AFTER he uses the power he never put any effort to obtain, you should get the idea of how down to the business I am here. In other words, if you are looking for a novel that takes human flaws without any cushioning, a novel that doesn't solve the main character problems just because he is the main character, a novel that's realistic to the bloody level yet unreasonable when it comes to the actions of the characters you don't yet understand, then allow me to present you with this piece, one that I have no qualms to call my masterpiece.