I Time Travelled to TITANIC. Help! I want to go home.

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Northeast

the concept is good, the execution is poor, too dumb of a story for my taste.

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Laxmi_narayan

important your writing and do something with mc characteristics because it look like a fool and with that stupid lafter it look like proper joke it look like you are writing first time so please read what you have written so far before posting more chapters or overall it look like a story dog liker,fool, unstrategic, unliterate stupid that beat around the bush with a stupid laughter her.🤔🤭😌😔🤕🤢🤮😵

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Benoit_Valtin

I dared to watch 15 chapters, I'm sure no one can overcome my masochism... frankly as others have said the basic idea is great, but the story seems written by a 10 year old child it's is maddeningly simple.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Good idea. Everything else is horrible. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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_asdfghjkl2021

terrible writing...writer really needs to step up and improve by A LOT

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Xavierzelaya2

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NeaCambelt

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ChildishSin

I ain't reading anymore I already singed my eyes enough with the writing quality and the dialougues seem like something from Wattpad.

LV 4

Telibisyon

This is a good story about Jonh a dumb lawyer who obtain OP power(plot) and is sent back in time(another earth). I love the concept of the FL and Mc, the Mc is dumb, funny, smart (sometimes?), and the smart(plot )FL who views the world as an equation. I also like how the MC interacts with other characters like Bruno, William, etc. The romance is not very good, but not very bad either. The grammar and punctuation need some work, as there are many mistakes that make the review hard to read. For example, use right pronouniation correctly, and avoid spelling incorerectl.I recommend this story if you are looking for a comedic novel, not a quality or realistic one.

LV 14

GonadSmasher08

Writing Quality a little bit of correct paragraph construction will make wonder for this work Stability of Updates updates are regular Story Development a little bit fast but manageable Character Design quirky is the only description i can give to the MC World Background hmmm, situated in Earth, so it is just a so so In General if you see pass the a quite poor quality of writing (I read worse) you will find it enjoyable. My bet on which universe he fell into is Marvel. Being in DC is non-sensical since he will not be unique on having a lantern ring. hope the author will not drop this fan-fiction puso lang!

LV 4

Boy_George

Great read! Mysteries, supernatural and superpowers. Romance too. Give it a try.

LV 6

dukroger

The MC is very imbalanced, it got too much power too quickly and too easily, the only reasonable power is that of Skynet and the nanorobots. Maybe it will improve with time, but I couldn't bear to continue reading, I wish the author luck. The initial idea and interaction between characters is not bad, if the negative points are changed it could become a good story, there is a story here in the web novel in which Jhon Snow gains nanorobes and various abilities and powers resulting from this, this would be a more compatible example and without exaggeration for the world the wto is in.

LV 3

Jetmach

Needs a rewrite without the sudden inclusion of blue people/demons without including some information on what kind of world this is. Just seems to be throwing stuff in to make it more exciting.

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Alvin_Alvarez

this is great I recommend. keep up the great work.