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In the mind of an NPC

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Author: GoGo

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After reincarnating into the past as an NPC, Girisia was faced with two options, either fall into despair and continue to barely survive in the lowest drenches of the society or make a stand and find out who played this ugly game with his life.

Now, if destiny is to be challenged, there should be nothing wrong in using the immortal resources that come in the form of Players.
After all, "A hunter cannot be blamed for hunting a prey that willingly served itself."

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Read my other work called "Jealous Nerd vs The Immortal Army". The story of an unlikely manipulative hero without shame or care for the world. Born with a vulgar mouth and equally cursed ability, the immortals will regret meeting him. If I have to say, he is polar opposite of the MC in ItmNPC.

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    GoGo
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    Hello! The Author of this novel is here. I am rewriting the details here as the last time was written on android and I can't type on it properly. The MC here is not super smart, super strong, super manipulative, or good at virtually everything. He is just an average person who knows how to use common sense and like in life, he experiences failures a lot. But life is about growing and evolving and our MC will do just that. All his bad experiences will make him stronger, all his losses give him more experience and he will grow up to be a monster later. There are also lots of side characters in this novel as MC is not a one-man army, he will slowly create a group of his own because a single person can't do everything on his own. And none of these members are those that worship MC even with his knowledge, instead, they all are part of his group for their reasons. About the story: ARC1 - Mostly introduction and how the world got affected by players and introduction of the organization that will play a part in the power struggle in the future, nothing important besides some introductions. ARC2 - This happened between the five-year interval players disappear for and will have the most growth on MC's front. This arc will tell the tale about MC finding that the world may not be the same as he remembered and some changes have taken place. ARC3 - This will be the player's arrival and probably the arc where MC will leave his base planet and meet the other characters[native/npcs] from other starter planets whose story we have been following since ARC1. And not all of them may be friendly. ARC4 - TBD Just read it guy/buddy/fweand So just some details about the world. The world is divided into three newbie planets each with its Power system. Planet of Prenia is the knight and magic planet. There are two unique paths in this, The knight path which gives you power similar to dragon ball z characters, and the classic magic system. Planet of Taurus is the mutant and externalist planet. There are two unique paths on this one too. The mutant power system uses biomass and genetic mutations to exceed their life limits and reach transcendence while the Externalist uses tools, mech, and advanced weaponry to fight. Planet of Danav is the beast planet. There is only one unique power system on this planet and it's called Shaman or totem warriors. These warriors can control the beast, use beast spirit to enhance themselves, create totems, etc. Besides these 5 power systems, there is a sixth one common on all the planets. And it's called Domain and has a different name on all the planets. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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    Aczekial

    One of the best evolution novel I have read on this app, the power level in this novel is pretty high which will keep me exited for the end game. While this novel has many strong points like side characters that actually feel alive and world background that is interesting. the most notable aspect of this novel is probably the character development of our MC himself which we can clearly see across the stories. So yeah totally recommend this novel now go read it already ๐Ÿ˜Š. The only thing I can complain about is some typos of the characters names but it actually does not affect your understanding that much ๐Ÿคฃ Ps:Even tho author commented three months ago that there is no romance in this novel, I still hope you will give him the companion he wanted at the end of story ๐Ÿฅบ peaceโœŒ๏ธ

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    UnhingedTaboo

    The world is diverse and MC is not the only living being with common sense in it. Though the grammar can need some fixing, but the story that is told here is miles apart most of the new stuff. The world and its setting is pretty unique and from the author's review, it seems that the power systems are pretty diverse too and not the classic RPG classes. In my library for now, will read when some chapters accumulate.

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    Ayanko_Chan

    Well this book is good if you want to read but maybe not me because mc to weak and expose to much danger in the beginning of the story. Make him look like player that npc. Sometimes the main point of the story is confusing me to the point of drop this book. The plot where he reincarnated?transmigration?i don't know!. To confuse because mc previous worlds or memory before became npc. That all i have and I'm apologize for the author of the book if you see this as insult or anything bad. I just review this out of my heart contentโ™ฅ. Keep your hard work and don't let your feelings hurt because of my comments ๏ผผ(>o<)ใƒŽ

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    Valixiant

    Alright, this is a decent story. Extremely similar to The Legendary Mechanic, except the main character is all in all, a less competent version of the TLM's main character. My main problem with this novel is the constant POV changes. I've read quite a few light novels, and there is a very small number of genre's where a POV change every chapter or two works. This is definitely not one of them. There are far better ways to show the interactions with players and NPC's. In a lot of new novels, I notice POV changes are steadily getting worse, with MANY novels adding these in. Everything else is average. If anything slightly below average, due to how much of this novel seems very similar to TLM. Overall, novel would average, but the POV changes outright ruin it. Theres a POV change every other chapter, it's really annoying. Most people are going to skim through it, causing many readers to potentially miss important information.

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    Tandoris

    TLM but slower. Too much "Player" POV ruin the rhythm and the progression is so slow , like, i've read 30 chapter and in all this time Mc is still weaker than random lvl 1 player... the 'funny' part of the novel take too much time and overall the novel go in so much way at the same time that the story just stagnate . Also same joke than in TLM wich just tiring to me cuz i already know them

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    swdmlzqa

    Well firstly this is a slow paced story...and mc makes some not so great choices at beginning...so unlike me who is into ffs and fast paced if you're into slow paced and character development plots give this a go....... #Slow paced # Reincarnation #Reincarnated to GameWorld #NPC #Average MC #weak to strong (?) # Character development (?) #Evil organizations(?) #Schemes and conspiracies

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    Black_sheep_

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    EmptyTaoist

    Disappointing, i read all free chapters and i wonder if this is an experiment made by scientist to test what are the limits of what do we willing to endure while reading. Mc is dumb, by this im not saying the normal mc dumb but the infuriating type, he played 10 years of a game with 1/8 time extension wich should at least mean he got few decades of experience and knowledge how things work but he didn't even consider very obvious red flags that shout [Stay away weakling ] he even got a skill that should be a danger perception but no it doesn't even give clues if mc dumb enough to not even think about it. It's not like mc didn't have opportunity's other than that, im sure there was a lot of opportunity's better than the one that screwed him over, i don't rant anymore but the first 55 chapter doesn't worth my time. I don't know what author want to achieve with this but i didn't think it could bring in readers or enhance immersion, the snarky system remarks/sumb choices after another /the lack of consideration even after 6 months (the time mc spent in this world) is the reason i dropped this. The mc do not have any quality so far that interested me to stay for remaining story. And pitting mc against an endgame powerful entity is also very cliche that most likely could only be solved with marry sue plot armor with how dumb mc is.

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    Hannah_Baker_4213

    Iโ€™ll be honest. I am enjoying these stories of NPCโ€™s in the Game lit genre. Especially from the view that they are not just XP for the โ€œHeroโ€™sโ€. I enjoying this book. Itโ€™s unique and interesting. I didnโ€™t really dislike or like any of the side characters, they were okay. This story is from a not so simple NPCโ€™s viewpoint. He does his job, There are not enough stars to rate how warm, kind, knowledgable and professional the team is. Overall on having a good experience just don't put it on hiatus. Much love from Meerut love you my G

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    AllMightySpeed

    Really love the passing looki g forward to the mcS personal growth !!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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    SID_8415

    Gotchu ma boi..great work ..had fun time reading it ... literally a piece of art ... can't describe into words....but still writing this whatever ... especially great characters and

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    0902_2

    This novel is very enjoyable to read. I loved the characters as well as the world building. The writing style used is easy to read. I am not a particular fan of this genre but tried it as my friend recommendaed this one. And I must say I'm enjoying it so far. Hope the author continues this level of writing. Will be waiting for the new chapters...

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    carry78
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    Loved the world and setting, the characters seems deep even early on and the main character is not a know it all or Mr perfection .He fails often and seems to be learning as he goes on his path. The world building has huge potential too.

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    Ryuuko_Matoi

    Great story so far. Feels like you are in an RPG setting with a vast explorable world full of different races. The early character introductions felt very akin to how they would have appeared in an RPG complete with stats. The imagery is very lucid and descriptions of places are to the point and don't necessarily drag on. I would like to see how the author intends to take this story ahead.

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    Friendlyauthor121

    I have read two chapters and very excited to give review this novel is fab,it was like all things are running like any film in front of my eyes I won't say anything about grammar because mine is also not so good Keep writing author...[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    bunnyrabbit

    Where should I start... Okay first, the plot is really good, it has a lot of promise. The way that the author describes every scene is so vivid that I can almost see it flash in front of my eyes. And it's not an empty read either, you can feel certain emotions as you continue. But what I like best is the MC. He's not overpowered from the get-go, he's an NPC that has the tenacity to survive. I think this will be a good ride so I'll add this to my library. Keep updating, author!

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    UnknownTrash

    chewy thats all we can day it really is chewy though

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    InspectorGengar

    It's a intriguing novel to say at the least. I don't normally review but it shows the Mcs progression alot more than I expected. He is a broken man inside and n his intelligence being lowered doesn't help. He can't outsmart an entire barrack of people which is why I say it's intriguing the Mc seems more human as he's selfish and does what he wants. His attachment to his family is there but in the start it shows conflicted feelings about them. He has been a player and he's been a npc - he caused destruction as a quest now he has to avoid such things as a npc. His mentality makes sense to survive but you gotta remember he experiences both things. Is he a savour no - is he a villain no he's just a human in a world where nothing makes sense.

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    RealmWriter

    Great story, amazing writing, though there are some grammar mistakes, nothing detrimental that ruins the experience, I have read quite far and can honestly tell that this is a great book and has a lot of potential, and just that it's not my cup if tea. I would highly recommend this book, since it's great.

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