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Year 1318
(Prequel to Vampire Chronicles)
Joanna had suddenly lost her father in the hands of witches all in one day, Her friend Cory takes her to a ball in the kingdom of Ediessa where the great lord Alonso resides there. She was also given a task to do from her fellow chief that is also her grandfather to deliver a message while she is there.
Joanna didn't know she would have to pay for her grandfathers debt only to become a personal maid to serve the Alonso but she doesn't know that Lord Alonso wants her for himself.
Joanna & Lord Alonso(Preview)
"My dear Joanna, there is no where to go you can't fight me here" Alonso stepped closer towards her holding his hands out as she took steps back holding the make shift blade in her hands.
"Why are you doing this! Why are following me everywhere I go! I don't understand it milord. The way you look at me is frightening.."Joanna was hesitant seeing his dark red eyes look into hers. She feared that the lord would kill her for something so small. The stories she heard about him wasn't a good look for him but she was sure that he didn't care for anyones opinon about him except for her.
"Everytime you try and run away from me it just makes me want to chase you even more. Your going to be all mine no man shall touch you but I my beautiful Joanna." Alonso gave her a smile that was filled with insanity. Joanna knew the lord was deranged but she didn't know what was in store for her next.
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Nice storyline👍👍👍 it's really good although there's some improvement that need to be made concerning the grammar aspect but still it's a good story
Wonderful!!! Author you should upload more so we can enjoy it.🥺🥺🥺 Love u author. This is so good and I think this will be a cool work in the future. Thank u author giving us such a thing. ❤❤❤❤
Well the start seems preety good and I like, a little grammar improvement will make it much better. It kinda gives me Cinderella vibes but more misterous. Hope you'll update more in the future
This is wonderful, interesting and enjoyable 👍 Only 3 chapters, but still love it completely. Please do publish more chapters and good luck Author 😃
It's just been 3 chapters and I'm already in love with Joana I love this story it makes me feel like I'm the one in the characters place cause absolutely hate her family and their not even real😂
I'm already in love with this story so i hope you continue updating like it got me curious what's going to happen next waiting for more updates
What a rollercoaster of emotions those chapters were, i really enjoyed the last chapter, the author did a great job pulling the emotions of the reader, and twisting it all over. However i did notice some wording mistakes, and some paragraphs were like a wall of text which did displease me, but besides that, this is a solid story.
This is a Cinderella story that intrigues me. I do not like her step family. They are so cruel to her. I'd love to read more. Keep up the good work.
Why isnt there more chapters, the writing quality is great, the world background 🔥, What caught my eye was the synopis, who doesn’t a possessive Ml
O m G its a wonderful story still reading but am hooked well done, The author is doing a great job already attending it to my library. am following you all the way