Magical Odyssey in Marvel

LV 4

BookDragonling

Dialogue isn't great and the interactions between characters are even worse. Every interaction feels weird and the conversation is stilted. Basic grammar is generally fine though there are a few mistakes here and there. I've set this aside as something to skim through when I run out of other things to read.

LV 3

OrangePanther

Shameless self review, because I'm shameless like that. In a seriousness, though, I hope you like this fanfic. I have alot planned for this.

LV 1

Mirio_kun

I hope he will go to Kamar taj too. Those magic will also making it much easier for him to live and not just survive. The fic is good. Hope you will continue to update like the usual.

LV 3

April_04

Author i m ready to transmigrate in this marvel - harry potter combo world Universe take me..... .

LV 10

End0

unoriginal,.................,.................,.................,.................,.................,.................,.................,.................

LV 2

NightOwl_Soren

Great HP fic, has potential. I'm too sleepy to say more, deal with it.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Story development: 2 star Character desing: 2 star World background: 0 star The story is super slow, to the point of becoming boring. Nothing interesting happens and the interactions with the other characters are bland and/or silly. The first chapter was a good start...

LV 3

naraiz_ryhall

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

LV 4

trudny1

Story and ideas show great promise for future, main downsides is poorly written/lack of character interactions. It might improve later as I'm writing it after chapter 9 and MC didn't go to Hogwarts yet.

LV 4

Jeffrey_C_Kingston

MMM MMM MMM MMM MMM MMM MMM MMM MMM MMM MMM MMM MMM MMM

LV 13

ClarityDojo

its rly good im wondering if your posting this on other sites i cant be bothered to deal with webnovel telling me to download their app to see the full chapters

LV 1

no_to_supp_abuse

Please keep up the good work! It's shaping up quite nicely, and your improvements show with each new chapter. I really wonder how those other stories that aren't even legible get to have higher ratings than stories like these.

LV 3

uflesh940

The MC wants to fight alongside/against MCU people. Like, does he have a death wish? I get wanting to defend yourself against them, but this guy can just teleport away from any danger. Braindead MC.

LV 1

Jorge_S

Esta bien de momento la unión de universo marvel/potter está bien pensada y no e visto cosas forzadas k son comunes en este tipo de historias, me está pareciendo interesante pero aún tiene que despegar solo está sentado las bases

LV 4

flys36

I really enjoy the world and people in this story. The chapter length on the chapters that I have read up to ch. 17 have good length even for a speed reader like me. Also I have found very few errors in this book so far and greatly appreciate that. I also like the update speed on this story and as always hope a good story like this can go the distance.

LV 12

LittleBoyDeath

Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue.

LV 4

aiden_rivera

amazig65/5 wewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewewe

LV 14

BoyishVoid

This story is showing some good potential. It's still to early to tell if the story will be good, but the current pacing and system is pretty nice. Some of the character can be bland though and there are grammatical errors that slightly detract from the experience.

LV 11

OutofideasLOL

Not a unique idea. But as long as the writing is good who am I to criticize... Stable updates so far. And perfect grammatically. Let's see where this goes.