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In a corrupt society dominated by technology, a man who desires infinite power and despises todays society strives to change the world back to what it once was. But ones greedy thoughts could be ones created weakness
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I hope this novel goes far. Please write reviews because it helps a lot and share it. Your support is my greatest motivation to continue writing. Also kindly suggest ways in which I can improve it
An unique genre this one, yet there is potential for it. If author works hard enough he would make it into a fine story.
Excellent plot and good world background. Intro is so good and there is plenty happening. I just recommend you shorten paragraphs a little. Cannot wait for an update
a truly interesting opening I can see where the writer is trying to go I give him points for originality and I will enjoy reading this entire journey until the end. from one author to another keep up the good work.
The beginning of the story is so captivating. It has great potential. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work and keep updating.
Honestly after reading this novel, I feel like I am not capable enough to review it, everything about it is perfect, except for the long para that you can break into smaller para. The story setting, the foreshadowing, the character design, the world building and the suspense is on a whole another level. Seriously till now this is the best Sc-fi novel I have ever read! I am extremely excited to know further about who the real villain is Julia or Thomas ( I just have my doubts on him😉) Also there are some scenes that I found a bit confusing and I have already mentioned them in the comments. Last but not the least, Good Work Author!! Your work really made my day today!
Reveal Spoiler Thank you for your support and yes I will try to shorten the paragraphs to make it much easier to read
The start is very interesting with Dr. J's mysterious plan of using providing the world with supernatural powers that comes with lethal risks, the grammar is okay, my only suggestion is to separate the long paragraphs into shorter ones. Keep up the good work!
Good story with a good plot. Character design is great and the start is pretty good. I would like to see how this book will do in the future