Synopsis
I live on Gronos, a place full of terrible wars, skillful assassins and god-like emperors.
Emperors fall like flies, people die in great numbers. Empires, however, they never fall.
Life here is spent quickly.
You are born, live a life with whatever goals and ideals you have and then die from lead/iron/laser(etc.) poisoning.
I, for example, have been an ordinary teenager until the attack that ruined my life.
Never gave a shit.
Now, I go here and there and harvest lives of good and bad, rich and poor, foul and holy.
You pay they die. It's that simple.
Or they just die, ask my mood.
But after me only emptiness is left.
I also go on to complete a task that ends me.
But who cares?
As for you, dear person who reads this, I have only one thing to say:
I know where you sleep,
for I am more than I seem to be.
My peace is at the same place as my memories, lost to the winds of times.
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It may be weird how I decided do make my MC a partially schizophrenic madman who slaughters his way through life.
It is on purpose. And do not worry, it all ends up well :}
Watch for the twists and turns. I'm bad at keeping my mouth (and thought process) shut (and undistracted). So you could end up with a spoiled thing.
What a joker I am.
Chapters in range of around 1.6k-2.4k words. They will not be going under 1.6k words.
The book is changing it's overall direction in meantime so it's changing it's plot rather often.
If you are not willing to read some quite complicated shit, then go around this one.
WARNING!!!
It's on hiatus and in rewriting process.
I'll republish it as another novel in due time.
More at the end of the novel.
(may seem shitty and confusing now but I hope that rewriting will solve those probs)
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Author here. All best. Ofc its five stars. I'm the author......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I am having a really hard time trying to understand what the hell is going on in the story, I think that I might drop it for a while. It's not because of the story but because of my inability to understand it.
This cultivating couch potato hath cometh here for the slaughter promised by the author, Theo. Truly a man of culture. Adding this to my Library.
This Bear brings Doom to everyone and everything it doesn't like. I like this so may the stars bless you. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
a pretty interesting read so far. looking forward to more chapters afterend of hiatus :) thanks :) and now i have to fill 140 characters...
I am a dog I love fried spring rolls! I like your novel! Take my 5 stars! Write more and publish new chapters everyday! Fried spring rolls is delicious when dipped in a sweet and spicy sauce! WHY NO UPDATES?
Reveal Spoiler I am a dog I love fried spring rolls! I like your novel! Take my 5 stars! Write more and publish new chapters everyday! Fried spring rolls is delicious when dipped in a sweet and spicy sauce! WHY NO UPDATES?
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Note: I give 5/5 stars regardless of my scoring below. Also, the story only has 4 chapters at the time of this review, so it's really too early to properly judge it. Keep in mind the score could change a lot (for better or worse) as more chapters are added. Writing Quality: 3.5/5. It's clear the author speaks English, but I'm guessing it's their 2nd language. It's good enough that readers should have no problem understanding what's happening. It's just that some sentences read a bit oddly and minor grammar mistakes are common. Updates: 2/5. Looks like two updates per month so far. Story: 4/5. Original story that's fairly interesting. It has a lot of potential depending on how things play out. Minus one point because the MC (Shorty) is just kind of going with the flow for now. But really, it's too early to judge accurately. This could easily be bumped up to 5/5 after a few more chapters. Character Design. 4/5. The characters are interesting and engaging. Their appearances could be described in more detail. World Background. 5/5. It's clear the author has put a lot of effort planning the world/universe before writing, and that effort shows very early on in the work.
Overall I really enjoy the writing style of this author, it being first person really hits home to me! The way he pulls you into the MC and leaves mystery in the first chapter gets high praise from me . Looking forward to new chapters once you've outlined this well!
Not bad but more action is needed. Hasn't got many descriptions either. But it is quite interesting.
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I think that this guy's only problem is writing speed. Everything else can be overlooked. Also, Author should describe more. I hope he does something good to excuse himself for this hiatus.
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