Naruto: Ōtsutsuki lineage

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Luizz_Ricardo

I abandoned this story, why? well the protagonist says that even though he has an otsutsuki lineage+wise body+tenseigam+pika pika no mi he wouldn't be strong at 17 like naruto and sasuke, wow man the mc can stay still until he's 15 and he'll have more chakra what a hashirama

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Zarek8_31_07

It feels like a machine translation and the world, story, and main character have all the depth of cardboard. Let me give you a tip when it comes to editing and grammar; If it were run through Grammarly and the obvious Chinese influence (all the freakin proverbs) was paved over and replaced, I could see this getting a good 4/5 stars. An even better idea would be to take what you like from the original fanfic and make your own fanfic from the premise, because the IDEA was great, but Chinese fanfic authors kinda suck at the execution, ngl.

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KaratePepe

I can't decide if this is a translation or just bad English. Also, it annoys me how you refer to MC by his full name.

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NetoXIII

Congratulations on the novel, interesting to put a hyuuga with MC, there are almost no novels with this theme. ____________________________________

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DaoistLLHlJS

Hope, you'll continue your translation. I really like tenseigan stories. Does anyone know of little-known ones? (Like Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan)

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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