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In his recklessness, Vash found himself in another world.
He ventured onto these strange lands and left behind undying legends.
//Hello friends, I have been reading various books on this amazing site, and so I thought why not make one of my own to share it with others. It's my first time trying to write so be lenient on me and tell me any mistakes I make (plotholes, paragraphing, sentence structure, dialogues etc.) to improve my writing.//
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I'm writing this in my free time, So I won't drop it halfway, but the rate of updates may not be consistent.
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This is the worst story ever. He ends up in Africa, eats a fruit and immediatly turns into some godly being that is able to challenge mihawk. Made up powers that he instantly got without explanation occur multiple times. Also you randomly mention a superpower after a few chapters without explanation. Your story just makes absolutely no sense. The pacing is all over the place.
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Ok... I read my work after the blackout from the writing and found many shortcoming in the story. So I thought why not review my own work. So far I think the pace of the story is good.. comedy felt good except for some cringy part. Grammar is ****ty with lots of substance missing. Characters are pre established in Canon and no major changes except for ocs. Overall I think it's ok for just casual reading. I think I can except it as passable for my first story.
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
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1- the WG dosnt give out bounties for randoms for no reason, so mc getting a bounty for just fighting mihwak is retarded. Hell they didnt even approach him, and yet they gave him a bounty. Thats stupid. High bounty is dope, but give a reason. Hell luffy punched a noble and attacked marine ford and destroyed impel down and he only had his bounty raised by 100 mill (though all fans hated this, and i agree...)but i hope u get what i mean 2- what retard tells that they are from another world? Dude, u dont do this. Why would u do this? Unique power is believable, especially in one piece 3- why is MC so trusting that he gives this info within hrs of meeting? I get they fought but seriously? Telling u are from another world to a stranger? I am an amnesiac would've been enough Look story is interesting, dope even BUT damn man, no bash/flame but ur bk has some retarded shit